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Why did you stop caring about her, /jp/?

Scanned Irisu doujins only exist in fantasy

Got killed by a SU-85B. All my shame.

Reposting from the old thread

I noticed at least one punctuation error in the 10k ending. Went to type it down and missed the next line. Then I went back to the game to finish reading and completely forgot where the error was. As far as the timing for the text goes though, it all looked okay. Though did you still want the two rows of text to appear at the same time? I noticed that was fixed for some parts in the 20k ending, so I figured it might be able to be fixed for the 10k end.

More stuff I noticed on this playthrough:

-1st CG

Last line. I think the "everyone" is left over from when you were putting the names in front of the text. I'm not sure if you wanted to keep it or not, so I figured I'd point it out.

-2nd ending

Typo: "unnatual attitude" should be "unnatural attitude"
Kyouko's name is romanized as Kyoko in the line before "What's with that look"

-あげは.txt

Romanization of Kyouko's name is off. To be more specific, it's in the 7th line.

I'll go through Metsu tomorrow.

Bah. I noticed at least one punctuation error in the 10k ending. Went to type it down and missed the next line. Then I went back to the game to finish reading and completely forgot where the error was. As far as the timing for the text goes though, it all looked okay. Though did you still want the two rows of text to appear at the same time? I noticed that was fixed for some parts in the 20k ending, so I figured it might be able to be fixed for the 10k end.

More stuff I noticed on this playthrough:

-1st CG

Last line. I think the "everyone" is left over from when you were putting the names in front of the text. I'm not sure if you wanted to keep it or not, so I figured I'd point it out.

-2nd ending

Typo: "unnatual attitude" should be "unnatural attitude"
Kyouko's name is romanized as Kyoko in the line before "What's with that look"

-あげは.txt

Romanization of Kyouko's name is off. To be more specific, it's in the 7th line.

If we're not at autosage with this post, I won't be able to make the next thread. I ask that whoever does make the next thread includes both the download link to the game and the latest translation in the OP.

I'll have a look at Metsu and replay the endings tomorrow.