/jp/ - Otaku Culture

>>16063049

For all the "eroge gettting hold back by ero" the medium gets sometimes, it's probably more "eroge getting hold back by otaku".

So yeah, hope you all like your schools, shitty ero-writing and whatnot.

So the "avatars" of the girls all got a bust-up, huh? So typical.

But whatsoever, I'm dropping Kokoro Log. It's unfortunate. It has a decently sized soundtrack which isn't too bad, nice artwork and good production values for the most part. But the writing.. or rather the "story".
This really reads like a nukige even though it's not one. The story is pretty garbage, the writing tries to make the girls seem cute in a way too forced way and so on and so forth. And the purity factor slapped in your face. "Gets multiple confession per day, but rejected all of them. Never accepted help of any guy, but the MC. Just happens to be happy he 'isn't popular' with girls". How about you just spell it out? Are you that afraid that someone might think the girl doesn't like the MC or something?
With all of that you basically expect the porn to fly from right and left at you. The virtual thingy is the same. The whole concept is garbage that feels like it's just there for porn. It's "for a game", and nicely enough the heroines don't know the MC (or other heroines) are in the "game", they are supposedly AI. But the MC gets to know the truth. And what were those weird footsteps they heard when the truth was revealed, maybe someone actually LISTENED IN? What kind of TWIST may come from this?!?

It's.. so bad. Next time maybe get an author that can actually write something that's not just a shitty nukige. Or.. make a nukige.
If it weren't for the virtual crap I might've read Kuon's route, but her virtual alter ego is shit. (well, all of them are shit, though outside of Koun it doesn't really matter as the real version aren't really much better either..)


Such a shame, with the nice art and all. This could've been a great moege with the right writers. It could've been a great nukige. But as it is it's just a whole lot of wasted potential.