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Doujin game every days.
Well I'm back after reading a few more trials during the last few days

窓辺の天使 first since I posted about it in the last thread.
Overall the trial was interesting, the mood and production values are quite nice and I personally like the art.
The story is about the protagonist who suffer from disease and doesn't have much time to live, to spend his remaining time he decides to go in a hospice in Italy where children with similar circumstances reside.
The trial itself isn't too long but the cast is quite huge already, the text isn't anything fancy but it's clear and flow well.
I also liked the magic tricks of the protagonist that give a good twist to his character and offer some interesting scenes.
The second half of the trial showed the first hints of a big mystery and shit hitting the fan but nothing concrete yet by the end.

Anyways my main problem would be the shortness of the whole thing, the trial was supposedly half of episode 1 (the only episode available so far) yet was still in build-up mode, episode 1 itself is only supposed to be around 200kb and it's really not much.
So maybe it would be better to wait till more episodes are released to see if it ends up taking an interesting shape.
So wait and see for now.