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>>46398659
Bloodied from the battle, Seija struggled against the ropes binding her to the chair. How did this damn fox get the better of her? Everyone else had fallen: Seiga was gagged with one of Alice's dolls and now boiling in a pot, Konngara's horn was broken, killing her instantly and those damn tengu convinced Flan to join there side. Then Ran pulls a sneak attack on her out of nowhere!

Ran: It's over. Yukari has already been dealt with. Don't even try to fight back.
Seija: I didn't give a damn about her in the first place! But since you fucked with me, I'll be sure you get your just desserts!

Mustering her rage and focus, Seija concentrated on Anon's room. A rumble came from deep inside in the HSE.

Ran: What did you just do?! If you hurt him, I swear-
Seija: Oh no, the only one getting hurt is you! I didn't flip his room or his organs or anything that boring; I flipped his sexuality! Now he'll never fuck your sorry ass again!
Horror glazed Ran's face. Instantly, she conjured a gap to Anon's room. Out came not one male body, but two. Interlocked in the throes of ectasy, Anon mashed his face down against Goro's delicate lips.

Goro:Mhmhmmmm aw yeah
Anon: mhmhmmm you're so cute Goro
Seija: GORO WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU DOING?
Goro: Seija, I'm sorry but I was in Anon's chamber and something... came over me. As soon as I saw him, I was awash in a tidal wave of homolust. I couldn't help myself. I'm sorry but... I'm Anon's wife now.
Goro presented a simple ring on his finger that once belonged to Anon. As he did, Anon grabbed Goro's ass and pushed a finger into his mouth that he desperately sucked.

Anon: What did I say about talking to others? Just for that, I'm going to make you pregnant for real.

Anon pushed Goro down in front of Ran and Seija, mentally and physically stuck in place respectively. That day, the floorboards didn't stop squeaking.

Takes me multiple weeks to think and plan a 2-post Tsukasa story. This shit? An hour tops.

>>45258528
I have an extremely sneaking suspicion I know exactly who you're planning to use because I'm planning to use them too. HRtP 'hus are too versatile.

>>44897919
I like it. Makes sense for Seija to go more violent than the other 'hus. The irony of wanting to destroy the HSE in order to ruin everyone's fun is perfect.
As far as your writing, it's fine enough, better than my first. Practice makes perfect. Stick your prompt in a word processor like Word or Libre and read the whole thing from the beginning before posting. Yeah, this isn't English class, but dotting "i"s and crossing "t"s go a long way towards flow and immersion. It also helps to cut down redundant details and fit the character limit.
>Closing in slowly she could see him... talking to faux manakins of storekeepers as she closed in.
You can remove one instance of "closing in" from this sentence without removing detail.

>>44315880
Hopeless Masquerade 4

>>44097868
>>44097873
I guess I'll download it a and check back in a month for updates. /egg/ gives me pain now so I'll just hope progress happens.

>>43537986
Do you have to respond to every single post mentioning you? That's serious attention whore syndrome. Commit sudoku.

>>40288467
She can do worse.

>>39508645
>Fake fans don't steal
That's right, only real fans do!

>>38588182
>>38593800
Good finds, thank you.
>>38595215
Seija is my derp, fixed.
>>38595139
Are you choosing some weird clothing or does it crash it in the menu for customizing your character? Download newer version in any case. Don't use the "release" version.
>>38596536
Seija just goes into heat by default when she pushes you down now, it's a new edit from the author. I don't agree with it, but whatever. I guess it's so that she enjoys herself rather than hate herself for feeling pleasure due to her traits.
>>38596732
Need tongue skill 2 or more.
>>38596645
>>38596685
The list was updated, coming in next merge, together with the (shitty approximate) line count for every character in #Translation folder in Character Dialog Amount.txt.
>>38600141
As long as they don't get unconscious C/V/A/B/M exp, it's fine. Don't kiss them.
>>38600758
I told him the same thing.

>>27822316
Hey, don't be that guy. Calm down.

>>20622431
You wouldnt dare!!!

YOU'RE NOT THE BOSS OF ME NOW