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>Hmm, well, I'm sure the cowe will retcon something at some point, probably...
sensei doesn't do miracles; we'll need a fucking blue eclipse for her powers to even be on par with Hana's power level (autism)! It is just too strong!
>It was a lot of fun dancing around the issue of Mystia starting off her character arc by killing Hana's half-sibiling rape babies. Since that underlying guilt and the fact that Hana didn't really say any lies, even if she was hyperbolic to all hell, kept Mystia from forming a more effective defense in my mind.
It's understandable; unlike with Hieda at Keine's house, she was mostly by herself and had no proper safe net in Mokou or iron-willed support in the cause with Keine and the Suzu. (Yuu) got her back though, and that's what matters!
>So you want to write Hana's first reaction to Sanae getting gunned? fine with me and all that. I was leaning on Hana, trying to follow through on her words and attacking Heida for obvious reasons + spoiler
seems good to me and this guidance is greatly appreciated (though I may have some surprises~)! Should post the batch tomorrow or after tomorrow, depending on how long I want it to be
> 2nd spoiler
not a good idea, that could put Sekai in a bad spot and develop bad habits in the project of always having a safe net in Sekai, meaning many things will lose their stakes and her character will be soured as she'll become this glorify fix-it button. With Patchy, Meiling, Yukari and Anon, it's understandable she can manipulate the fate around them because they were there when she finally came to life, and Goro came after, but those are the characters she has a deep connection with for now.
I trust Hana as a character to stand on her own strengths and be able to deal with what's to come with Mr. Hieda, even if that's defeat; inserting Sekai into the scenario would take off more than add.
Though, as a passive watcher/in passing, I could write a situation where 'Ana's powers clashes with Mr. Hieda's (just wait a little more~) and thus she sees, even briefly, Sekai's tree, where the HSE stood and maybe talks to her, depends on you, as I'd stop there to let you write that. It'd be left implied whether she interfered or not, and such mysterious passivity is a nice way to portray a sheer force of nature like Sekai.
That's how I'd handle it, at least, and I'd love to hear your thoughts should you decide that'd be a worthy part of Hana's character in the festival (you write Hana best, after all)
sorry for the long read...

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