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been lurking since day one, at this point reading new updates is part of my morning routine.
kudos to writeanon for writing this spectacular fic, I specially loved adventure parts of story like anon exploring streets of former hell and small things like Yuugi using glasses when doing paperwork.
I also loved more serious parts of story and of course the suspense in Eientei arc.

I kinda agree with >>45925578
about direction of the story, lately it feels anon has been "winning" too much and hugging too much, I miss the clueless anon finding himself in serious situations that he couldn't handle.
I feel anon having too much powerful allies where nothing can threaten him effectively anymore is splashing lukewarm water at the core of the story, how about an arc where he is thrown to another realm, it would be a great contrast to show how anon has changed from a clueless pal to somewhat competent man who can survive on his own.

>And that's not helped by your habit of overly repeating information whenever Anon thinks about something that happened more than two threads in the past.
I always got the feeling that it is intentional, like anon is writing his experiences.
if not, remembering past events can be done in a more subtle manner like some details are missing or the memory is a bit changed from what actually happened because of anon's denseness.

in summary I miss anon meeting youkais in dangerous situations by himself and not being able to rely on others.

also YUUMA, AHHHHHHH YUUMAAAAA, GIVE ME MORE TOUTETSU SLOP AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

I will continue to read regardless of wherever you take the story to and am thankful to writeanon.

btw does anon's hair color change to white when he gets power from Hecatia and transforms? Dante fighting in hell confirmed canon?
and when is og anon is going to be introduced into the story, Reimu is feeling lonely. I wish 'mu was more autistic in this story considering how she acts in canon.

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