/jp/ - Otaku Culture

I appreciate the positive words about my animation. I feel, though, that it is also important to seek out avenues of improvement through discussion (if one desires such things). The goal is to onramp /jp/sies to animation/drawing through mutual cooperation because it's the kind of thing you can dedicate your life to and have fun.
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>>42015690
I was afraid of this reaction because it is definitely an unusual "first work," so I can only hope to make it up to the thread by trying to help others learn in a faster, easier, and more understandable way than I have so far.