/jp/ - Otaku Culture

Been really uninspired, I want out. Did a something just to force myself out of inertia, it's not even mixed.
https://soundcloud.com/ibuki-san/boppy-bgm

>>15078187
I like it. A more pumping percussion/rhythm would really add to it, I believe.

>>15079366
Nice sukia.

>>15079404
This looks nice, but a little too alien to really tell. Overall it's nice.

>>15079448
What's with this Oxado dude, I would throw it away on my first chance to.

>>15080590
Impressive perspective skills. The characters have to catch up a bit, but that actually gives me motivation, shows that more analytical approaches are feasible, and that's my way of learning things.

>>15080669
Holy shit, this guitar sounds awesome. The flute-thing and those quick kicks(?) are really washed out by it, though. Urgent mixing is required for full power!
>artistic slump
I wish my slumps were half as productive as yours.

>>15080872
Your writing hurts my eyes.
But the song/medley is pretty cool!
I'd bet a bit more of your soundscape on the lows, though. Highs take too much protagonism.

>>15081015
Ah, very comfy coloring. Shadows add no volume to it, though.

>>15081097
Yummy rendering. Best kind of rendering.

>>15082829
Woah.

>>15083732
I believe the melody is not following the progression, that's why you feel directionless. And you should either give the flute more ambiance (it sounds pretty flat, which is natural for an asian flute) or try to flatten out the rest, so they blend together.

>>15085732
How can you paint it all wrong and result in something charming instead of bad-looking? Nice.

>>15087318
Please, complete the fish's upper contour.

>>15087418
Work on your hands, then.

>>15087655
What the fuck, don't you ever zoom in?

つづく。