/jp/ - Otaku Culture

I remember mentioning I was working on this doujinshi sometime last year, and I've since dropped it and picked it up again. I wanted to have it finished before Comiket, but procrastination's a bitch. I constantly redraw iffy-looking panels too, and if I keep that up I'll never finish the bloody thing.
As much fun as I've had with it, I just want to get this thing out so I can work on something else for a change. Get some critique, learn from my mistakes and do better next time.