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>>6427939

Thanks. I'm looking through them now. I had to look up how to use a comma, but I'm pretty sure I found everything in the notes in Metsu.

Note 1:

"That cat was cute and friendly, it was truly everyone's favorite." - I think this should be two separate sentences. Replace the comma with a period.

Note 2:

"Well, childen have a tendency to be cruel" - "childen" should be "children"
"Being careful that nobody would see me I sometimes went to see it." - there should probably be a comma between "me" and "I"
"The cat and the rabbit would play with each other through the fence, I saw it many times." - This should probably be two sentences as well. Replace the comma with a period.

Note 3:

"She was a girl, about the same age as me." - the comma isn't necessary
"That girl showed athsmatic symptoms because of cats." - "athsmatic" should be "asthmatic"

Note 4:

"I didn't know if she would have a coughing fit,
that's why I could only watch her from afar." - Since these lines are on two different pages, it would be best to make them separate sentences. Just replace the comma with a period and capitalize "That's"

Note 5:

"That's what the teacher had said." - It can just be "That's what the teacher said."

Note 6:

"Before I noticed, the girl was abscent from school." - "abscent" should be "absent"

>>6232882
Thank you!