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>>6559476
The quality control approves?

Used in Art Class.txt:

"Carrying the body of the rabbit, I leave the cage." - "cage" is the literal translation, but perhaps "pen" would be better in this context. It would seem kind of weird if Uuji was in a cage.
"I hid the rabbit's body in a bush in the corner." - "hid" should probably be "hide" because everything else is in present tense.
"Dead as if it was sleeping." - "was" should be "were"
"Varous thoughts ran through my head." - "varous" should be "various"
""We should be caeful"" - "caeful" should be "careful"
"What ever happened to the girl?" - whatever is one word
"Afte the rabbit died, nobody saw her again." - "Afte" should be "After"

That does it for everything but the normal Irisu end and the two longest text files. I didn't have much time to do stuff today, but tomorrow should be a little better.

Irisu thread?

Irisu thread.