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I liked Gahkthun quite a bit overall. And I hope MG translates its fandisc, because it takes place a year later, so it's basically the epilogue of the story.

The one chapter that I thought wasn't very good was Chapter 10. Everyone else in the story acted like idiots due to Coercive Suggestion, but Amy and Jo weren't under it. Amy stealing her sister's fiance and then wanting to kill her for not being as cheerful around her anymore was just moronic. And Jo promised Neon she wouldn't try to steal Tesla from her way back in Chapter 5, but still asked him on a date and had sex with him. Considering what her sister did to her, you'd think she'd know better than to do something like that. I actually think Jo could've been a much more interesting character if they gave her a better story arc and didn't just have her as the other woman.

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