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>>2467535
Well, I made two different comments about the perspective. First, I criticized the anntenae's perspective and how it looks as if the head's position is as if it's facing down. Then I criticized the overall face's composition, and how the low nose and mouth style give it a kind of forced downward perspective.

I know my comment is confusing but I can't be bothered to type a better one, as I am not very good expressing my ideas.

You said you like drawing long noses. I like long noses too. The problem with your drawing is that it looks like you drew a "normal sized" nose on a face with a 90 degrees perspective, instead of a long nose on a face that is (if what I'm percieving is right) face slightly turning downwards. It also makes me think the nose is actually an (almost) equilateral triangle, instead of, well, this: >>2467535

Have you ever watched Kaiji? While the general style is quite different from yours, both share the long nose aspect. Look at Kaiji's face when his head takes a lower angle, even if it's not much: The nose covers the mouth.

Maybe I'm being stupid and your Wriggle on >>2467347 isn't actually looking (a bit) downwards, but yeah, I already typed all that so I might as well post it. Sorry if I'm being confusing again.