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>>43647861
Some news;
I'm really not happy with this bit.
I'm not all that happy with the Aya intermission either.
I think I've gone in a weird direction honestly, and I think I want to take it back, and to do that I want to rewrite the latest bit, and maybe a minor rewrite of the intermission since I think the language is too stiff.
I think I've been having trouble ever since that bit in the pub, but I ended up being more or less happy with how it turned out, even if it was Meiling heavy for what is supposed to be a Yuuka story.
I think I might take a break to do some other stuff, and generally plan out a little more since I've gone off of what I planned to do originally by a long shot, a week at most.
I'll try and come back with a rewritten chapter, but since the intermission is more or less fine just needing a touch up, I think I'll just do that and post it to Ao3 after editing, since it's just to make things less clunky, not messing with the intent of that chapter.
That gag with Meiling sleepwalking wasn't funny in retrospect, and I think it's because I forced it out when I was tired, and it didn't really suit the character I've given her.
I might be back sooner than expected, but I'm also going to be moving to a new computer soon, so that might throw me off as well since that'll probably take up a night at least, without even getting an OS in there and working.
I've got everything saved, but I really do want to rewrite some of the latest bits since they're not great. Sorry for the interruption to an already slow series, but I think I'd prefer to have a short break to do some stuff without worrying about writing to a schedule, than to go ahead with poor ideas that aren't up to what I want.
Once I do get back though, I'll probably have more energy to get more out and make up for lost time.