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I dunno, but it doesn't strike me as very good. The beginning is your terribly written self-insert shit for loners, where the protagonist is all "I don't wanna~~", but the cute girls still drag him into the club anyway. Seen that one a million times, and it's one of those things that are by default shit. Unlike most moege, where it doesn't take too long, it drags a little here though, so who knows, maybe it's not going to be as bad as I think... not very likely though.
Also there's only one girl who you could call good. He did better than this before.

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