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>>40271398
The issue is that there's no villain, so the entire story falls apart. Rika, though she was dumb as a bag of rocks, had a legitimate real problem of an entire spec ops team led by a homicidal psychopath trying to kill her and all her friends PLUS everyone around her constantly going batshit insane and murdering each other.
Satoko's got homework. There's NO ANTAGONIST aside from her psychotic obsession with Rika, which was entirely handwaved and never developed properly. So either an antagonist needs to be added back in(looper Takano, Tokyo, HS outbreak, etc...) or she needs a much better explanation for going crazy(Satoshi dying in the coma, her HS getting worse over time, being trapped in a worse loop, etc...)