/jp/ - Otaku Culture

>>40963750
I guess this slightly falls into the realm of constructive criticism but there have been times where it feels like you might have gone slightly too far in your style of writing to a point where my eyes start glossing over the paragraphs because it's got so many twists and turns that my brain has fallen off the ride at the last word that was over eight letters long. The Futo story you did was particularly rough on my mind, but nearly all of the other stuff has been fine.
I guess what I'm saying here is that you should consider us dum-dums, but continue to write for people who brain think good.

>>15500380
Who says I can't go for both?