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153. The Present
>If you don't live your life to the fullest, you don't deserve to live at all.
A very short story about a boy who makes friends with a girl and the secret she keeps hidden until years later.

Story is too short to really develop anyone. A parent's divorce is the only device used to characterize Peter as a slightly emotionally troubled person seeking stability in his life. The middle of the story is time-skipped and only summarized. Art is passable, but it's a mishmash--backgrounds made by different people (some that look more painted, others with a normal CG look), sprites made by different people, and only one BGM.

It's more like a person trying out Ren'Py than a real effort.