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>>2464999
I think one of the bigger problems here is that the pose doesn't seem like had one in mind, specifically because it's incomplete.

When you rough something out, the entire thing ought to be roughed at once.

You're being a bit amitious with the angle, which is good.

As for anatomy, you departed from Youmu's childish proportions a little. Her arm was too long, and her legs may still be a bit long as well. I took some liberties and added the other arm in a position--any position.

If you can make your rough poses even as complete as this you're going to be better off. As a tip, try using light red or blue to rough out, it's a bit easier that way.