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>>47088792
not nearly enough

she could've taken care of little Reimu; at least then the miko wouldn't be such a lazy and poor as fuck bum

>>45525647
Yuuka jobbing motherhood…
so cute!
>spoiler
it's not really stepping on toes integrating other characters. Just don't do anything too major with variables the other authors wouldn't understand and you'll be okay
about the second part
in a vacuum, a nice idea. But in the whole fic that'd be a bad choice having a conflict here, mainly because it'd relieve the thread of tension, and that'd be terrible so close to the finale.
The finale will be mostly battling and emotional conclusions, the first of which has been hyped up since the beginning of the project -- exactly why I didn't make Kasen and Yukari battle in the pond. That'd massively relieve the tension of their supposed battle in the finale and would make it much less impactful than it'd have been initially.
I know it's important for Mima's development, and that's another motive to hold it for the finale. My best advice would focus entirely on their dialogue, make it as aggressive as you'd want a battle between them to be, yet without violence. That'll create drama and increase the tension of their interactions during the finale, and will feel much more rewarding. And make more sense, too. One motive Yukari is so hyped up is because, without spellcards rules, she's basically invincible. A knife would simply be gapped away, same as lasers and danmaku. It gives sense to the massive preparations everyone is doing to defeat her.
During the finale Mima will be able to team up with Ran that'll be closing the Gaps; Reimu that'll be floating over them; Toutetsu that can theoretically eat them and more; let your creativity run wild there. There, it'll make sense for her to actually stab Yukari.
sorry for the massive wall of text, but discussion is important for these important moments