/jp/ - Otaku Culture

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Suzu before bed is just as good as Suzu after waking up! Especially these ones! Look at her go! LOOK AT HER GO! She's a very courageous middle aged lady, maybe the most courageous of them all! A tasteful talk with Anon, laying a more grounded view on growing up with the feeling you're failing people that should matter the world for you is a great read on Suzu's character in the project; and then the internal monologue pulling strength from others' struggles as to march forward into the scythe of Death, that's the essence of courage right fear: fear, but action nevertheless.
The archive scene with she immediately getting distracted by the mess but then concocting a plan to get the yama books felt very silly, like straight up from a cartoon, but in a good way~
>I did it. I fucking did it.
SHE FUCKING DID IT! Ah, if I could hug a character before shaking her shoulders while yelling, "yeah, you god-damned did it!", oh well.
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eyyy, nice! Waiting warmly before chucking her into the hellfire that'll be the next Keine chapters~
thanks for the chapters!!
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All very sound writing lesson.
Don't feel pressured and end up overworking yourself, Suzuanon. Writing here is not a job; take it easy and better your writing on your pace!