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>>15633482
Much better and clearer than mine. I like it.
Yeah, the belt felt too tacky.

>Neither is the shading on her crotch, or her stomach. plus she's missing a navel in addition to a few other small tweaks.
Yeah, I forgot about those, I was mostly talking about the general dress design seemed finished. But yeah, there's a bit more tweaking needed.

>Also, do you think her right leg is fine totally bare, or should something be added?
Yeah, I was also thinking that it's too open. I tried adding part of her pants to the left leg but it was too short.
Probably more shading will do the job but I feel like something should be added to her leg. It's too barren.