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>>16075637

Yeah, they could've put more effort into it, like giving important adults a face. It's kind of jarring when the CG showing Kazuki and Orino carrying her faceless mother.

And the ending could've shown the friends on the aftermath of the events after they sacrificed themselves to help the couple escape. They've done so much to the couple in this route, they at deserves a scene in the end of the route, when they going back to the school after everything was wrapped out, possibly with they commenting how things going well for them while teasing the couple. Especially the males: Only Sen's and Reina's voice can be heard when they visited Orino with her baby in Orino ending, and in the normal ending, only adult Orino, Sen, and Reina shows up. Where's my bros? The VN start with 7 friends and should've ended with 7 friends too. The chosen heroine should've been the central point of the ending, but that doesn't meant that the close friends don't deserve something out of the ending.

Speaking of the last H scene, I was more disturbed at the transition of the couple from the first H scene, from innocent kids trying to please each other to Orino eating his smegma and Kazuki drinking her pee, and she continuously spouting dirty words during the actual sex, and begging him to cum in her wombs.. Maybe the couple need to learn a restraint or two after all. Imagine the parent-walk in scene if Kazuki's mother decided to go home early when they still doing their stuff. I'll laugh my ass off if that happened. Not that this is a bad thing, just my opinion.

So, yeah. Fun, it fulfills my expectation when I get this game, but still has some stuff that can be improved. I wish this VN is a higher price title so they could put more effort into it. I hope AkabeiSoft3 could at least hold their quality standard here. But knowing them, they'll churn out lower quality titles after this, so I hope that all their next release would flop so they can go back making another lolige with similar or better quality.