/jp/ - Otaku Culture

>All's Fair In Love And War Ch.4
>Half a month to finish a 12k word chapter that I should've finished in a week
>All because the drafting method I had was so inefficient I always ended up writing the same story twice over
>Drive to proofread deader than my love life
>If I wait till I get the will to proofreader it'll be another half a month

There shouldn't be many errors, if the earlier chapters are anything to go by.

http://pastebin.com/gB6R8mrZ

That aside, in this chapter I finally gave Victoria the proper Esdeath outfit, started turning her into the pseudo-mayadere I envisoned her as since the start, and also introduced a certain thing I've been foreshadowing at the end of chapter 1.

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>Victoria
>Wrath

If only you knew how bad things are really gonna get