/jp/ - Otaku Culture

>>15111411
>>15111780
Clothes are too tight you should have just made her naked and even if jeans were that tight, the underwear line would not show.

Not even mangaka who draw make clothes look so bland like you do, make some effort to make the clothes look semi realistic. Her bandages have too many unnecessary lines. Even Guts bandages don't look like that.

What's going on with her posture? She looks like one of those girls who always purposely sticks their ass out and then have spinal problems later in life.

That kid in the picture up on the right what's going on with her hair? You should look up proper reference pictures for something like that and even if the characters hair is supposed to look wavy/curly it would not look like that mess you've got going on on top of that girl's head.

Who did you say your inspiration was again Miura? And you've obviously got some turtlefish/that other porn artist eyes going on.

You keep posting the same thing over and over again, churn out something new instead of posting the same thing repeatedly with little to no progress or change.

Did you draw that picture of the Lamia?