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I think I asked this before, but could someone look over this translation and see how it fits into the strip? Also, some stuff isn't translated, I think.

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Urashima Tarou ver. yukkuri

1 - One day, a yukkuri was being bullied.
-Stop! No! Go home already! Don't take it easy!
(Cirno: ora ora, sfx: right of yukkuri-poke poke, up and down-tremble)

2 - It was saved by a miko who didn't really seem to be into it.
Reimu: Hey, stop.
Yukkuri: Take... it easy!
Cirno: Tch...

3 - This is the gratitude flag! (kanji to the right: Rei)

>>1217015
Look through the thread, you'll find the rest.

Can someone look at this translation and see if it's correct. The third panel seems a little strange for the attached. Also, I'm missing a few SFX here and there.

Urashima Tarou ver. yukkuri

1 - One day, a yukkuri was being bullied.
-Stop! No! Go home already! Don't take it easy!
(Cirno: ora ora, sfx: right of yukkuri-poke poke, up and down-tremble)

2 - It was saved by a miko who didn't really seem to be into it.
Reimu: Hey, stop.
Yukkuri: Take... it easy!
Cirno: Tch...

3 - This is the gratitude flag! (kanji to the right: Rei)
Yukkuri: Follow me easy!

4 - We lost our way!
Yukkuri: This way!
Re~mu, this way!
I think!

Urashima Tarou ver. yukkuri

1 - One day, a yukkuri was being bullied.
-Stop! Yamete! Go home already! Don't take it easy!
(Cirno: ora ora, sfx: right of yukkuri-poke poke, up and down-tremble)

2 - It was saved by a miko who didn't really seem to be into it.
Reimu: Hey, stop.
Yukkuri: Take it easy!
Cirno: Tch...

3 - This is the gratitude flag! (kanji to the right: Rei)
Yukkuri: Follow me easy!

4 - We lost our way!
Yukkuri: This way!
Re~mu, this way!
I think!