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what a read, god fucking dammit. Beautiful characterization all throughout, and the way you breathe life into Remilia's character makes me all happy, man. Her act of selflessness and the continuous care for Patchy is just the cherry on top, thought the soul of this sequence lies entirely on the way you choose to portray Meiling and Patchy's conversation post-merge; having it all inside the former's mind, with the way there being an act of bravery and sacrifice done by Patchy. Never expected it to go like that, but am happy you did it the way you did, it was pristine -- I got so fucking mad at the poor Anon that posted during the chapter dump, fucker broke my immersion... --, and the symbolisms too with the little bird when they were talking about Sekai; the World Tree in the back of Meiling's consciousness showing duty and all the little things sprinkled around Meiling's mental palace elevate it much higher.
it instantly made my day better reading thought it all~
>[...]"Count yourself lucky, child." Patchouli murmured. "That it was we stubborn fools who were bound to your world that day." She raised a hand to her head as another burst of lightning illuminated the world tree in the distance, lurking in the back of Meiling’s mind. "Isn't that right? Sekai?"
also this is my favorite sequence and had to go back a little just to perfectly sync it to “reBirth ft. Takeshi Saito”, direct hit to the kokoro man.
the ending with Patchy finally letting go of the sea of woe she accumulated in the HSE got me staring at my roof for a minute, very well done, won't be losing this smile for some time!
Another facet of Meiling's confusion about Sekai use of Remi's power, I'd like to mention, is: every use of her power following the destruction of the HSE will be, of course, interrupted. Anon, Yukari and baby Renko, for example, will lose the plot-armor she just covered them with for the Solstice. Meaning all assurance Sekai has that Meiling and Patchy will be capable of pulling her resurrection off is trust, and while manipulate fate so they do pull it off completely works, it is as effective as planting a bunch of autumn crops right before Winter, as Remi's fate manipulation only goes until the HSE is turned into dust.
thanks for the chapters, Patchyanon!!