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>> No.15099076 [View]
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Yes.

- Eating poo-poo would have made Remi sick, and limited her choices in the future.

- Eating one of Two's babies would have angered both her and her daughter : those babies are the reason they're allowed to survive after all. Remilia would have been beat up by Little Reimu, limiting her options for the next choices.

- Hiding from Deibu's horde would have led to more yukkuris dying, but Remlia staying safe. Mister would have punished her lightly for not fighting.

- Running away to find where Deibu's group came from would have let Remilia to find a hole somewhere in the house and escape from there.

As there were complaints about how dark things were getting, I was sure the thread would rush to this solution. I even introduced Deibu's return as a way to offer Remilia a door to escape earlier than originally planned.

From there, there would have been different options, and timeskips to have Remilia grow up.

She could have tried to go back to her birthplace, only to find it destroyed by human children. She'd then have wandered the streets, and found either Flan2, her sister, or a friendly Sakuya to be her friend.

Or she could have landed in a bakery just so I could use pic related, and have an happy ending as a cute female baker's pet.

Finally, I thought about how, if the thread managed to keep her alive for a dozen chapters more, Remilia might, after several timeskips, end up as a gigantic Dosumilia living in Easy Forest, a nemesis and friendly rival to Reimu's story's Dosu.


Finally, what would have happened if Remilia had eaten Little Reimu ? Well, she'd have been alive when Mister came back, and would have stayed a few days more in his care before having another chance to get away. Two ould have hated her guts, but there's not much she could have done.

Fun fact : I originally planned the first "fight" option in response to Deibu's arrival to be a dead end. But seeing that everyone chose it, I changed it to a losing fight, with options to keep fighting or fleeing. Fighting was to be a dead choice, but when the thread once again picked it, I changed it to a sadistic choice : one last chance to survive, but at the cost of Remilia's easiness. The thread chose to resist Deibu, and so Remilia died.

Now, would you like me to write a third story ?
What would you like it to be about ?

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Do you enjoy the the written Yukkuri stories?
Which one is your favorite?

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