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>>12621686
>Cheesy, really? There are a couple pop songs with a "andalusian cadence"
It works given some circumstances, but not at the beginning of your song. Personally I would do it like this:
http://vocaroo.com/i/s00hPnB3KPWQ
It's a i - VI7 - VII - V7 - VI - IV7 - V7 progression.
The fast section is great, but I would change the Fmaj chord to a dm7 with F in the bass. That's just my opinion, so feel free to disagree with me

>As for the transition, you are referring to the last part of the slow half, right? I tried to keep it as simple as I could, but I guess it could stand to be a little more interesting...
I think it's too abrupt, but it doesn't necessarily means that it has to be long.

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