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Had a really small story I wanted to throw out here. Breakdown of a relationship between succubus and a paladin. The pacing kind of blows because I wanted it done and not the four or five times longer it would need to be with the proper wordcount. And I'm not sure the tense stuff is going to come across right.

So likes, dislikes, and a general if you want it put on the main pastebin instead of dying as a guest paste would be much appreciated. Hope you guys enjoy.

http://pastebin.com/hrfe0nkC