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Reposting my finished part 2 for those who want to read it.

I did some more proofreading and edited the way my Hatter talks because at first nonsense prose is fun but it's very creatively draining to write. What was up before was the result of the end of a swally that I didn't particularly enjoy anyway, so it's a little more inspired, a little more nonsensical. I removed the shouting match toward the end because I feel like I'm relying on those too much and want to ave more natural dialogue.

Here's the link, and for the love of Christ, please leave me feedback. I'm resolving to starting Pars 3 over the long weekend, no matter what. All contents will be subject to change though. I need to decide what to do with it, but I don't want to just make a CYOA because this is supposed to be my creative work, having others tell me where to go or what to do kinda defeats the purpose.

But I digress, here's the link; http://pastebin.com/PBGwVLAy

And I would deeply value some suggestions. Either through the email in my name field or in response to this comment.

>>11966620

>Space Jin's Kaguya

>>11584389
>Bro, I know we're only doing this for the photo shoot but… c-could you maybe step a little harder? K… Kimochi desu ne…

>>11081053

Not going to lie, those look kind of comfy

>>11058900

In all seriousness, that JAV where Misa Arisawa plays some yandere mom who ties up her son and rapes him in front of his girlfriend

I did not think it was possible to cum that hard

>>10228010
n-not bad anon-k-kun...