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I would never let dhampir-chan fall to her blood urges

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>>43051435
I'm here to show cute vampires that humans are more than just servants and dhampirs and that humans aren't just damsels to be rescued

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>>38363324
They might not be cringe but they are giant dorks

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>>17409009
I generally prefer third person stories, but that's because third person omniscient is pretty much the go-to perspective for novice writers. Third person omniscient present is stuff you only do if you're somebody like Stephen King with the Mr. Mercedes trilogy.

>>17409096
The main issue I can see with 2nd person is the whole pronoun of "YOU, YOUR, HER, SHE" when describing the two parties. That and who the fuck wants to self-insert into a character who is exceptionally plain or grotesque from years of hard-fought battles?

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