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>>46156906
Eh, I feel the same. Writing Yukari was hard because I actually forgot about her fetishizing Anon's hatred while writing the first hypnosis post (Part 13). Got stuck and just used Part 14 as a vehicle to get to Part 15 instead of scrapping and starting over. Yuyuko should have been cut.
I wanted Yukari to cry in the bathroom and have Yuyuko as her only friend comforting her from outside the stall just to evoke a trope. I didn't do much with it in the end. Not every idea is a good one.
>her body was still sensitive to emotional fluctuations
I made this up on the spot to patch my forgetfulness. Shit deux ex machina to make hag bullying work. Shikieiki part is intended to feel like a disjointed side-story that wraps up Yukari and the troublemakers on the side while Anon's plot moves along. If that doesn't jive with you, I get it. That kind of stroytelling isn't for everyone, but it is what I'd like for this part.

I may just rewrite Part 14 and have to slightly edit Part 15. I've got far better ideas for 14 that still lead to 15 happening without the bullshit emotional sensitivity. keyword: HAG bullying

>first time seeing such butchering of characters in 5 months of HSE
You forget when Aya agreed to share Anon in the Thanksgiving special. Ayayaya would never let that shit fly. Eggnant tengu jealousy would beat out any form of indoctrination.

what are some interesting relationships she has, or could have, with others in gensokyo?
e.g mokou, who will never die