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Hey guys. Well, it's time I showed what I've been working on the last couple of months.

1607 lines.
Lots of words.
A complete short-novel length story.

http://pastebin.com/Cae3MHsP

It's something different than my usual. It's an adventure story from beyond the gate. Tried to do in a mix of styles and try a few new things, but should mostly have the flavor of something like The Mummy meets The Secrets of the Sphinx. Just a good romp in the desert.

It's in canon with the YB, M&M and Vengeance universes. You'll notice a lot of cross references to the shared history among them all. But you should be able to still follow along fine if you haven't read any of that.

Comments and crits are most welcome. I'll be resuming updates on my regular stories next.

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