/jp/ - Otaku Culture

>>11436690
Honestly, I'd be kind of annoyed if someone started "fixing" my drawings like I'm doing to yours, but I thought it'd be simpler to show you than just explain verbally. I probably screwed up something anyway.

Her right eye seems to be higher and/or smaller than her left, even when you don't account for the perspective. I moved it closer to the center and stretched it a bit vertically. The shape of the eye is pretty much up to how you want to draw it, but I made it a bit rounder, seemed more natural to me.

The bridge of her nose seemed to be almost missing given how much of her left eye showed behind it. I raised it slightly and moved the nosetip and the mouth a bit as well.

All in all, seems to me like you drew the separate elements of the face (eyes, nose, mouth etc) more or less where they belong, but you either didn't give quite enough attention to the whole or you need to study more facial anatomy, animes or not. As for the girl goddamn she's so cute