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http://strawpoll.me/3194155/r
http://pastebin.com/uRHsegQy

>over 20% didnt like it

Well shit. Thats a lot worse than usual. What went wrong exactly?

Was it the female perspective? This was the first time ive tried it. Do you guys just not quite have enough empathy to make the leap across genders? Its ok if you dont, I just need to take that into account when writing.

Did I make her too aggressive? I know there is a very vocal "monsters who imprison a shit" crowd on here, is this you guys?

Maybe its too simple? A monster breaks into his house and rapes him. Its certainly not high concept, thats for sure.

Was it just bad writing? Is there something else im not getting here?

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