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Hey /bmsg/
I am about to let Ayami know about my feelings. This is the letter I'm gonna send her.

Dear Ayami,
I know this is sudden, but I need to get this burden off my chest. I can no longer think of anything but you. My heart throbs at the mere thought of your grace and, in spite of myself, my imagination always carries me to you. I feel foolish and happy as soon as I think of you. I whirl round in a delicious dream in which in one instant I live a thousand years. I love you. I love you probably more than is good for me. I tried suppressing this feeling, for I knew it was in vain, but to no avail. I know this letter will probably never get an answer, but at least my soul will find relief in knowing that I did all I could in order to let you know about my feelings.
Forever yours,
Anon

Is it good enough? Should I change something?
I'm a bit emabrassed about asking something like this on 4chan, but I'm sure that here I will not get any sugar-coated advice. If you're going to help me with this, I thank you in advance. If not, I still wish you all the best. Farewell, /bmsg/