/jp/ - Otaku Culture

Got curious, checked the source.
Next chapter is too much of a pain to translate or even read. Finally gives a break from the beatings and replaces it with expodump from Patchouli.
Then he goes to Moriya by accident and at least Sanae is kind but then he offends Kanako and fuck it, this things makes no sense.

>>11798332
Looks to be earnest work from a young guy that hasn't learned better yet. He might improve down the line with more practice and study, but for now they're very much in 15 year old's notebook territory.