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>>12159836
She's overall pretty cute, and you have some nice lineart, though I can pick out some construction problems.
Biggest issue I can see is that the angles of her face and body don't correspond
(face seems like it's turned to the left slightly because of the nose and midline while the body is in an upfront shot). This can be fixed if you keep a good midline in the sketch to make sure everything align. I took a bit of liberty making her pose slightly more dynamic too, hope you don't mind that. Face-wise, just use the established proportion rules and deform it slightly to fit the round anime/manga face (ref is from Micheal Hampton, if you want to look into it further).
Sorry if I happen to sound like an d/ic/k, but that was how I learnt things orz.