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Another songwriting exercise. This time I hadn't the time to refine the melody/harmony, so it's full of dissonance, but the metric is pretty much it:

http://vocaroo.com/i/s0aaliEgjjJh

To me it seems not long ago
There was a cradle in your room
And through the years I watch you grow
And through the years I see you bloom

To me it seems to be so fast
I thought these things would everlast
And through the years you get refined
And through the years you just remind me of her
You're beautiful
You're beautiful

Are you leaving like she did?
Are you craving to escape?
You are casting me aside
As soon as I close my eyes
You are plotting to betray me
Aren't you? Aren't you?

I would scold you countless times
Not to make the same mistake
I cannot just let you go
But the harder I can hold
's not enough to make you stop
Parting, parting

To me it seems not long ago
There was a cradle in your room
And through the years I watch you grow
And through the years I see you bloom
You're beautiful
You're beautiful