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Hello Anons! I always thought chicken’s design was kind of strange, so I tried improving it! Please give me your thoughts on how I could improve it even more.
>removed one of her hats, thought it was too distracting and strange. (even though i did like that it was a mini chef hat)
>changed her choker to black to contrast her hair, and added a star like the ones on her hat
>gave her normal sleeves since the detached ones also seemed like too much in her design
>removed all the mecha-like things on her chest and skirt. i feel like it doesn’t really match her character at all and doesn’t fit at all with the idol KFC theme
>made her nail polish match her eyes cause why not
>gave her a star belt buckle because i think the recurring star theme is cute. kinda like she’s a “rising star” like how a phoenix rises from the ashes
>gave her socks a subtle gradient that is the same as her feather earrings
>made her tennis shoes just normal flats
>changed all the navy blue in her design to a dark turquoise
I feel like something is missing bros. Maybe a breast pocket that has her brand logo on it? It needs some more elements without seeming distracting or overbearing.