/jp/ - Otaku Culture

>>11373094
i made a poem about mary. is it okay?

??? a lonely girl with a palette knife.
She must have been a girl in pain,
But she's been all alone.
Like the world she made in father's brain,
Where her hopes are left to wilt.
Pastel wonders floating in the dark,
Where she wraps herself in ???.
With dolls wet with acrylic.
And when she's crying in the black,
Scratching canvases crawling up the walls,
Painted ladies howling and their hands outstretched,
??? see her in her room, lonely,
Making friends out of paint and clay.
Giving them smiles in red crayons.
Never smiling back.
She's unreal as the world she made with pastels,
And her head's unhinged making sense of it all,
??? watched her steps make impressions on the ground.
Going home to the corner strewn with dolls,
Humming ??? ??? to lull them to sleep.
Trapped in father's brain all alone.
Watching flames turn her dreams into a funeral ???.
The parts aren't in the right places,
And I'm tearing out petals because they're in my way,
But I can make it out of here.
And I'll watch pink sunrises on the beach.
Fabricated world is getting darker,
Red dye coming out the windows,
Warnings on the walls.
You know who you are.
So lonelyyy ??? the
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