/jp/ - Otaku Culture

If they're going to make a multi world rpg, they should've remade this.

Just started Live-A-Live. I heard this game has a couple of good TWEEESTS.

Just finished the Present Day chapter and moving on to the Wild West.

Hey /jp/.
I've been working on a Live A Live VN (Oersted's chapter) for a while and have been posting updates every now and then.
By that I mean I've been claiming to have started writing a Live A Live VN despite not actually making any progress.

Anyways, I finally created a basic outline and have all the dialogue taken directly from the game.
Here's the question:
Should I change the dialogue to make it more fitting and more suited to a Visual Novel or should I keep it the same and preserve all the original feelings?

Also, I need to learn how to draw sometime soon.

Any drawing tips?
I figure I need to get some art for my VN eventually and should probably start working on it.

MugenJohncel, help me make a Visual Novel!
For free!

Captcha: team rippin

Hey /jp/,
I was originally writing a (really bad) VN just so I could say I've written one, but I realized it was absolute garbage and not something I wanted to say was mine.
Instead, I've decided to try making the last 2 chapters of Live A Live, but in Visual Novel form.
Oersted will be the main protagonist (And antagonist) for both chapters.
Any helpful tips I should know?

This isn't going to be a fanfic or a rewrite: It's just going to be a retelling of the last 2 chapters of Live A Live.

This would make for a very strange but good Visual Novel, I think.
Especiall Cube's chapter. (Even though it sucked)
Your opinions?