/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

REQUESTING BACKUP.
Or just possibly a redline.

>>1794646
One man's grave displeasure is another's greatest delight.

>>1793950
>>1793947
>>1793946
Fangdangler, is that you? =O

>>1762548
Tits overlap the armpit, almost as if they are anchored to the upper shoulder rather than the chest.
Elbow tapers off ungracefully.
The right shoulder (viewers left) seems to be just as high up as the other one, yet the tit is considerably lower.
Lots of poins in this are off balance because you probably drew the tits first and the torso around it.
Practice with real porn if you are going to draw toon porn.
I recommend looking at Gianna Michaels for that body type. Maybe Sophie Dee?
Find a video you like.
Pause it at a good point.
Draw from there.
Do this enough, and your tits will look shapely and natural.

Also, some of those dicks.
Think of where the men would have to be for them to be in that position.

One of those dicks is upside down.
Is he doing a handstand?

Is that Wilt Chamberlin on the left?

Is she on the ground?

Who was phone?

>>1651881
I AM, MANG.
I even drewd you some fanart. My suggestions are maybe a tattoo tha he got while he was drunk and is now really serious about, and body hair.
Sleazy cheezy body hair.

>>1651858
OOOH OOOH. And while you have the exposed midriff thing going, why not give him a little pot belly?

>>1651858
I like. Reminds me of le Chat du Rabbin.

But I think he looks better as a regular ol' sleazy street jockey than an arbitrary frenchman.
Even though you did take the time to make that lovely satchel of baguettes on his back.

I'd say go for something inner city. Maybe a dj with a foot fetish?
I dunno.

The frenchman shtick is still good though.
For more expressions try hungry, horny, or jealous maybe?

Put yourself in that character. Draw a whole sheet of just expressions and come back to us.

Also, do you have a tumblr?

The look you are going for.
Do some loomis and gesture drawing and your scary stuff will look way scarier.
Right now, that just looks like a scary face on a stiff body with some arbitrary metal attachments.
It's not going anywhere.

>>1647884
The pose is stiff, and the face is kinda stationary. I see what you're going for.
And you'll be able to much more properly convey that contorted, distorted crooked look once you have had more anatomy practice.

Draw from photos, study basic forms.
Read the sticky.
Get good.

Step 1 - google a fuckload of feet.

Step 2 - Avoid getting distracted by fetish porn.

Step 3 - Succumb to fetish porn.

Step 4 - Observe foot fetish videos to learn the anatomy of feet.

Step 5 - draw the feets.

>>1581516
Which designer was that?
I'd like to see some of your work, amigo.

ROLLING FOR DRAG QUEEN.
Will deliver once I get back from walking my dog.

>>1545485
Most def. There's a lot of energy in the pose, the lighting is solid.
Some people make comics that get on all the top tens and have successful kickstarters with less than half of that.
COUGHleasticouldjewHUUURK

>>1545481
WE ARE LEGION >=D

Also, one of us is a gay shark. That guy. ^
That guys the fagshark.

>>1545478
>>1545479
WHO ARE YOU PEOPLE?

>>1545478
Oh yeah, you know it, bro. =O
You bro it.
You IMBROSTER.

>>1545475
>he mad

>>1545471
That's pretty awesome. Do you have a comic?

>>1545470
You're an asshole. :D
I appreciate people like you.
Email me sometime.

>>1545470
butthurt jew detected, was holocaust too mean for our little baby waby?

An hour and a half into my very first digital painting study.
How am I do?
Suggestions?

>>1543859
IMPOSTER

>>1543869
TOO BAD I ATE HIM >=C

>>1543846
done :)