/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4672313
great content. its definitely serviceable for making comics. id try to finish what you started before really focusing on studies.

>>4671342
go back to making gains goblin

>>4671966
You symbol draw facial features and add inaccurate details to the body.

>>4669972
A new challenger!

>>4671670
spooky

>>4669521
I too like Zimbabwe

>>4671145
I really like survival styled stories especially deserted island type ones. Anything wilderness. Your skills arent very good but i like the concept. Keep it up!

>>4666650
imagine making content for the lcd

>>4667844
clean this up pls.

>>4666447
you right it down dummy

>>4663754
could just be skeletal development because of posture. look at weight distribution.

>>4663715
I like this alot

>>4659536
>>4659549
>>4659571
pic related
>>4659577
>>4659590
>>4659595
I agree
>>4659791
this is also a good redline but its more like a redraw.

>>4662567
don't worry style. if you think too deeply about what 'style' you're aiming for you will ultimately end up spending alot of time on something that will change as you get better at art.

>>4662905
look at her neck

>>4662195
>>4662193
>>4662191
>>4662190
>>4662189
nah ur fine. though take that class, it doesn't hurt to learn something new.

>>4662163
>>4662164
>>4662165
is there supposed to be a story?
its not bad, its really charming...but are you really trying to write stories?

>>4662154
Thats a really meaty forearm for a woman.
>>4662131
post more of the story for critique

>>4662096

>>4661983
nice uniform speech bubbles. really wish there was speech to go with it.

>>4661957
Your rules suck!
d:-)

>>4659735
Thanks based bumposter. You saved the thread.

>>4659753
Id open with the widest shot of the environment so you introduce the audience with the most broad idea of the setting first. Then you can zoom in and make things more clear.

>>4659755
>>4659756
Try to create some negative space between your panels. This might sound dumb but try using a chisel tip marker for your borders. That or use some negative space in between panels. It will also give you some places to add speech bubbles. When someone enters the scene quickly or abruptly try to make their panel indicative of that like its cutting into the already existing panel in a sharp and triangular way.

>>4659796
Trippy, make her do CBT next page.

>>4660231
Try to think about what method your audience will view your comic. If its on a mobile phone the panels should be larger and speech bubbles as well. If its a large graphic novel you can get away with lots of small panels and speech bubbles.

>>4660328
Hot

>>4660918
Same thing as the last guy i criticized. Make the environment shot the opener to establish the setting first and foremost. I.E "A long time ago in a far away land..."

>>4660956
Real rough and loose. Sucks i dont get to see what happens next! Would really do well to add some more context to his actions.

>>4661023
Is it a childrens novel?

>>4661352
Maybe if the thread becomes a mainstay. Ill do what i can to try and keep the thread alive but its not too popular for obvious reasons and i dont want to force it.

>>4661398
>>4661395
You can do better than this. Put some effort into it!

>>4661660
Quality content. This guy knows what he is doing!

>>4654678

>>3851697