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>> No.5239477 [View]

>>5238708
kek

>> No.5237968 [View]

>>5237601
STUNNING

>> No.5235986 [View]

>>5235967
Nice!

>> No.5235912 [View]

>>5235726
The panel flow is really awkward, but otherwise I absolutely love this. Do you have more?

>> No.5235158 [View]

>>5235035
Will do
>>5235115
Nice! I'm not sure which I think is best... I'm not sure I'm a very good judge of color, although personally I like either >>5235144 or >>5235118 the most. We await your return, anon!

>> No.5233894 [View]

>>5233805
Nowhere yet, I'll get up a webtoons or something when this first chapter is done

>> No.5233779 [View]

>>5233045
no not yet
>>5233384
presumably he drops it, maybe I should've made that clearer though

>> No.5233775 [View]

>>5233413
Yes but it's not up anywhere right now since the original thread bit the dust. I'll post them all in one place when they're done, until then I'm posting new pages in >>5232463

>> No.5232463 [View]
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5232463

Post your comics for critique and the like

feel free to share socials as well

>> No.5230809 [View]

>>5229998
BEAUTIFUL

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>>5220599

>> No.5224645 [View]

>>5223714
Thanks for the advice.
>>5224022
Man, this is good stuff. Can't wait to see where this goes. Only criticism is that in panel 5 I'm not sure what that thing is on the horse's flank. Is doesn't really look like a satchel until you see the cowboy digging through it, before then it looks like some transparent inflated bubble growing off of the horse.

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>>5221566
Great yet again.
>>5221227
Thanks. Page 13 done.

>> No.5220519 [View]

>>5219866
Reads fine to me, although I thought "God damn, fine then. what's your name?" was said by the cactus for a second, since it doesn't really flow for the cowboy to say that immediately after what he said in the last panel. Feels a bit like NPC dialogue actually.

But otherwise no notes, it's very enjoyable.

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What do you guys think? I even did it upside down. I know it's not very good but I'm hoping you guys will have some advice to help me increase my accuracy

>> No.5216638 [View]

>>5216091
I like it! Don't worry about the wording, it's fine. I wouldn't have known English wasn't your first language if you hadn't said so.

>> No.5212062 [View]

>>5211576
We're just coincidentally both doing westerns at the same time, but feel free to make one yourself if you want

>> No.5211492 [View]

>>5211028
Whoah, this is really good!

>> No.5210211 [View]

>>5210202
That's not necessarily a bad thing, unless you yourself don't like the similarity. But yeah, he really does look like Clancy.

>> No.5209994 [View]

>>5209839
>>5209844
>>5209849
>>5209855
I'm loving this, anon! It's got a midnight gospel/kc green type vibe to it.

>> No.5207594 [View]

>>5207588
I'll post them all somewhere when they're all done

>> No.5207572 [View]

>>5207553
Nah, I'll probably just post in this one

>> No.5207530 [View]

>>5207408
westernOPanon here. Looks great! Godspeed.

>>5207482
>I'm not trying to "go anywhere," I'm just trying to tell a story about a cowboy.
Absolutely based

>> No.5206247 [View]

>>5206173
I think it's this https://www.instagram.com/living.void/?hl=en

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