/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4258805
>>4259727
Assuming this is the same person.
This mistake occurs often when an artist uses breasts that are in a bra as a reference. Here's a red line of what I came up with. It's clear you didn't use any construction when creating your drawing, as parts of the rib cage don't line up with the shoulders, the hips are broken and the belly button is improperly lined up with the waist on top of being overly defined with harsh lines.
If you have any questions about other changes I made, feel free to ask, but it's typically just about knowing proper proportions and anatomy and putting it into a 3D space.

>>4259806
Agree completely.

>>2926785
I got replies without expecting an audience, just relying on lurkers
I can't remember my trip also. I think this is it

>>2239453
Okay, thanks. That'll help me a lot.

>>2239440
>>2239442
>>2239442
Thanks guys. I love you.

As for the penis, yeah. I spent a lot of time adjusting it so I can see that my view of it got a bit awkward.
I'll keep the style of the tufts next time too. I can't be too inconsistent.

>>2239435
Saved! That's the best ref. I'll use it next time I draw bara. ;)

>>2239421
Okay :3
I like the pose because I was experimenting with bara and a front pose was ideal for me.
It's also my first time drawing bara.
It's also my first time drawing an actual man looking guy in many years.
I can understand how I'd be a 10 year old.
And 2 second sketches are 'pretty well' I'd think IMO :3c

>>2239379
I thought I could draw them pretty well, for quick sketches anyway here are some examples. I have the no dick, just the sheath version. I would just rather should you guys the full glory of cat ween.

>>2239370
That's what I figured. Then I looked up bara and came up with an inbetween of what I saw.
But yeah... I think I'm going to start an animal crossing comic or something.

>>2239255
finished bb!
This counts as bara, right?

>>2186207
My art teacher in high school once said, "If you can draw real life, you can draw anything." I finally understood that meaning.

>>2174108
sorry for the size. I just sketched a bunch, couldn't get inspired.

>>2185433
can't*
worst spelling mistake yet.

>>2185431
she's an oily succubus that has the light source coming from beneath. also I can git gud at soft shading.

just finished this one.

I just got my tablet in 2012 btw.

>>2179640
It kind of runs in my family. I'm the youngest of 5 children. The oldest (girl) became a concept artist, now living in Brooklyn.
I live in a small town in Canada, so it was like, "WOAH"
Second oldest (girl) is very good as well, though it's not her job.
Middle child (also a girl) Is rapidly improving to become a tattooist.
My only brother who's second youngest used to draw swords and guns and such when he was younger, but I haven't heard about him drawing much.
And I draw very frequently. Mostly porn.
We all were very encouraged by our dad.

When someone tells me about my artistic acheivment and how they like them, I ask them if they draw or if they'd like to give it a shot. I think it's a very beautiful thing.

>>2179665
That's what the last person said, then I had to rebuild my tumbum from the ground up and establish a new status on 4chun. Though the second part wasn't as hard because people knew my art style.

>>2178822
ayy bb, here's the nsfw version

http://imgur.com/sozNYtA
I know loli isn't allowed on here, so external link.

>>2178822
There'll be a nude version.

Trying loli for the first time, am I doing a good job? I'm not very good at drawing kids.
If it's crazy messed up like with anatomy, head size, body size, limb length... etc. I'd like an in depth critique. But I'll take anything to improve it.

>>2176368
Fixing the butt
Trying to find examples for feet in this position, but all I'm getting is shitty yoga ladies
I'll fix the shading, can't do soft shading for the life of me.
I'll fix the lighting for the abs, thankfully the lineart doesn't go crazy on it.
unfortunately, the commissioner wants that gesture.

I'm having a lot of trouble with this drawing specifically because of him. Because I have no practice with it, he asked me to put all these limbs in an odd, unrealistic place. Thanks for you help.

Hey guys. This is a commission I'm doing for someone. If anything looks off, any advice would be helpful!

Hey guys. This is a commission I'm doing for someone. If anything looks off, any advice would be helpful!

Working on a commission, anything I should fix?