Post your work and I'll redline/crit

[Anonymous No.4976562]

Post whatever you want redlined and I'll try my hand at some advice.
Pic related from previous redlines.

[Anonymous No.4976565]

We cooming now

[Anonymous No.4976566]

>>4976562

[Anonymous No.4976599]

>>4976566
Is this a meme? I was hoping on some begs or int to post to get some feedback.

It looks fine, I would sharpen the sword rendering and ellipse in bg.

[Anonymous No.4976707]

>>4976599
i see, now i'm cringing at how i approached the metal
thanks

[Anonymous No.4976726]

>>4976707
Oh, I didn't know it was actually you. I thought it was a crab attempt.

Yeah, it looks really good. Compared to the rest of the rendering, the sword didn't look like it had the right texture. I would maybe even drape the cloth a bit straighter and simplify some folds. I know it's wet, but it might be sticking too much to her body.

Hope that helps.

[Anonymous No.4976734]

>>4976562
I'll need all the advice I can get.

[Anonymous No.4976783]

Boy do I have a /beg/ image for you
I basically had no idea how to go about the hip to leg area and a lot of other problems are present too

[Anonymous No.4976787]

>>4976734
It looks good, I really like your rendering.
I would just work on anatomy and light source/form. I like that you're pushing the form, but I feel like it could benefit from a bit more structure.

[Anonymous No.4976860]

how to render and pick colors?

[Anonymous No.4976887]

>>4976783
I really like this, it's not beg at all. I think the perspective could use some work. Bottom half looks like we're looking up at her, top half looks eye level.

Hip area looks okay I think...

[Anonymous No.4976895]

hel.p

[Anonymous No.4976896]

>>4976887
Thanks I'll so some changes with that in mind. Trying to embrace more tricky angles has been difficult opposed to character just standing or somethin

[Anonymous No.4976917]

>>4976787
Thank you

[Anonymous No.4976941]

>>4976562

[Anonymous No.4976947]

>>4976562
Hey, my picture made it! I did the thicc girl down to the right.

Here’s more coomer art I just drew. Gotta try and channel that NNN energy.

[Anonymous No.4976952]

>>4976941
WHAT THE FUCK? BLOG???

[Anonymous No.4976958]

Just did this and really struggled with it, I do not know how to draw vagina

[Anonymous No.4976961]

>>4976895
Is this OC? I wanna see this girl doing this >>4976947

[Anonymous No.4976963]

>>4976958
hire a prostitute for research

[Anonymous No.4976964]

>>4976958
>>4976963
just be careful to not fall in love

[Anonymous No.4976967]

>>4976961
from vocaloid

[Anonymous No.4976971]

Thread ruined

[Anonymous No.4976977]

>>4976860
Rendering and color is almost the same thing. If you wanna separate the two, work in black and white and study how light affects objects of different colors and textures.

Color will depend entirely on your light source. Is it a warm candle? Cool moonlight? Overcast day? There are so many nuances when painting skin. For now just focus on getting the values correct, and study the different color shifts on the skin.

Try using a brush with higher opacity...I'd even try 100%. It will help with accuracy. Instead of building and building values, you can quickly pick a value and put it down.

I played with the values and added some more color. Also tried coloring the armor...I'm not the best at reflective chrome stuff...

[Anonymous No.4977110]

>>4976895
Looks good for the most part. I think it could use better shadow definition, cast vs form shadows. I would work on the hair as well.

I tried giving the body and hair some more definition and gave the shirt some form. Hope it helps!

[Anonymous No.4977111]

>>4976941
It's good, I don't think it needs anything...

[Anonymous No.4977140]

>>4976947
I think the perspective is off and the proportions are not there yet. Mine's not the best either, but I hope it gives you an idea of where I was trying to go with it.

[Anonymous No.4977141]

This is watercolor, not digital

[Anonymous No.4977175]

>>4976958
I think the lines aren't too bad, but looks like you were having some issues with the lighting.

I'm terrible at this angle, but here ya go.

[Anonymous No.4977191]

>>4976787
>It looks good
You're not even going to point out the tiny ass arm? Just draw a few lines over it lol fake ass nigga

[Anonymous No.4977373]

>>4977175
Neat, thank you anon. I was trying a new way to render so it's not exactly what I wanted, but yeah the lighting was hard to figure out as well.

[Anonymous No.4978412]

>>4977141
Jordan Peterson?

[Anonymous No.4978414]

Was going for more exaggerated proportions here

[Anonymous No.4978509]

>>4976562
can't help but feel that something is off with the colors/shading

[Anonymous No.4978638]

>>4977141
only true talent can recreate chickenscratch in watercolor

[Anonymous No.4978647]

>>4978414
I would work on making your poses more clear. The one on the left is kind of all over the place in terms of gesture. The one on the right does not have a clear silhouette and it's not clear what he's doing. I actually had to open it up to see what was going in with his hands.

The guy's on the left silhouette has a giant dong.

Try doing a bunch of small rough silhouette poses and try to get them make it clear what's going on just from the outline. And try not cutting off the feet. Basically, plan the figure out with a rough sketch first.

[Anonymous No.4978742]

>>4978509
I think its cool. The shading looks a bit flat. Almost looks like you're lighting it from our view but putting the highlight on the left. The mid tones are taking over too much of the shape.
The colors are okay, but the I would mute the bg way more, right now it's clashing with the figure and making parts hard to see.. weird, cause your values are good if you switch it to grayscale.

[Anonymous No.4978771]

>>4978742
Who are you kind stranger?

[Anonymous No.4978793]

[Anonymous No.4978804]

An actual helpful thread, holy shit

[Anonymous No.4978818]

>>4976787
>>4977191
What this anon said. This redline is really bad.

[Anonymous No.4978826]

>>4978804
Gonna be honest, ops redlines weren't very good

[Anonymous No.4978829]

>>4978826
This is why we can't ever have nice things here in /ic/.

[Anonymous No.4978832]

>>4978829
I would rather have someone be honest and tell it the way it is instead of out right lying.

[Anonymous No.4978836]

>>4976787
>this looks really good
This is how you know OP shouldn't be taken seriously

[Anonymous No.4978843]

>>4978414
Stop using Katy's how to draw manga book.

[Anonymous No.4978865]

OP is good. The advice is helpful and the basics of each problem are covered well. How about you stop shitting on someone putting in effort to help the community (also PYW). Let's make /ic/ great again.

Thanks OP, great thread.

[Anonymous No.4978875]

Pls help

[Anonymous No.4979215]

[Anonymous No.4979227]

>>4976562
>>4976787
Either I sell my art short too much and am not the beg or borderline int I think I am or you're beg or int yourself. You didn't even point out >>4977175's weird ass arm, which was far more offending than anything else you pointed out imo

[Anonymous No.4979233]

[Anonymous No.4979254]

>>4979233
Sadly, it looks nothing like tsunade

[Anonymous No.4979277]

>>4976562
Punish me, daddy...

[Anonymous No.4979306]

>>4979277
too many lines on faces, you're not drawing grannies

[Anonymous No.4979311]

;)

[Anonymous No.4979320]

>>4979306
Thanks, but I thought you were gonna destroy my terrible anatomy...

[Anonymous No.4979346]

>>4979311

[Anonymous No.4979371]

>>4979346
hahaha THANK YOU!)

[Anonymous No.4979397]

>>4976562
please compadre

[Anonymous No.4979412]

Please help

[Anonymous No.4979428]

>>4976726
>simplify some folds
i see and agree

[Anonymous No.4979430]

>>4979397

[Anonymous No.4979480]

>>4979430
thanks

[Anonymous No.4979486]

>>4976787
>>4977175
wait whats the issue with the arms? I don't see anything

[Anonymous No.4979491]

>>4976562
If it's not too much trouble anon-san.

[Anonymous No.4979495]

>>4979491
Sorry, forgot to resize.

[Anonymous No.4979507]

Alright, I also made this lion quick version of my catgirl OC to test my new XP Pen 15.6. The shoulders are stiff as hell, but the overall pose feels weird too. Not too concerned since this is just something quick I did to test out a graphic tablet but still. Also, could you give me tips for making her more tall and buff as well? I gave her the same body type as the original. Should I study more gesture or anatomy for now?

[Anonymous No.4979518]

>>4979507
You lost the snout

[Anonymous No.4979539]

>>4979507
shoulders are genuinely the least of your worries here

[Anonymous No.4979572]

>>4979430
are you serious with this "redline"? what is that huge amount of meat and fat behind her knee?

[Anonymous No.4979627]

>>4979572
yes anon drew a landwhale don't blame me

[Anonymous No.4979783]

>>4979572
>>4979627
>>4979430
is this better?

[Anonymous No.4979821]

>>4979783
frankly, not really
you keep making the calves too long, the breasts looks extremely unappealing, the stomach is folded like a sack of potatoes and the rendering is all over the place. The brushstrokes follow no form due to you not understanding what muscles the redlines were trying to convey
Sorry anon, just use reference

[Anonymous No.4979833]

>>4979783
I think this new one looks much better! the back especially is a nice improvement, the subtle indication of the ribcage works really well here

[Anonymous No.4979849]

>>4979821
alright alright,and also what do u mean by the rendering being all over the place and how would u fix that?

[Anonymous No.4979881]

>>4976562
I know it's not good and really rough. It's supposed to be a woman crying over a dead man. Pls halp.

[Anonymous No.4979890]

>>4979849
Practice

[Anonymous No.4979930]

>>4979849
by actually following the form
choose a light source, add values, make your brushstrokes follow the curves of the body, choose where to apply texture. Again, reference greatly helps when starting out, eventually you are gonna pick up how to render without it helping you, simply by memorizing and applying the knowledge
>>4979890
I know how to render is a generic question, but you could try giving more of an answer
>>4979833
please dont encourage mediocre results, nothing changed, they simply blindly tried to follow what the redlines did

[Anonymous No.4980058]

This whole thing has been guesswork
I want to redo it while looking at reference to see if I can get something better, but it'd be nice to see where I can fix it right now and keep it in mind before then

[Anonymous No.4980269]

>>4979486
Artist of the metal slime girl. The main issue with the arms as the other posters said is that they are tiny (which is very noticeable on the left one), this was a mistake on my part and Im glad so many people have pointed it out as I will be more aware of those issues in the future and lets me know which things I should work on. When working by yourself in a vacuum its really easy to be oblivious of these until someone points them out.

[Anonymous No.4980640]

>>4980058
not OP and don't feel like redlining but torso is too long

[Anonymous No.4981119]

[Anonymous No.4981128]

>>4980058
Torso too flat and too long like this anon pointed out >>4980640.
Ribcage is smashed and clavicles are not present either. Perspective of ribcage is off.
Broken right arm and birdlike left hand.
Generally, too long and flat ribcage.

[Anonymous No.4981178]

>>4976562

[Anonymous No.4981263]

>>4981178
wtf

[Anonymous No.4981497]

[Anonymous No.4981590]

>>4978742
thanks kind anon, i added more shadows and made the bg less saturated, i need to fix the colors on my tablet since colors are more saturated on it

[Dr. Green No.4981696]

>>4978771
Just an anon trying to help.

>>4981590
Much better, the bg is not as jarring now.

Going to get through the new posts today, thanks all.

[Anonymous No.4981728]

>>4976860
>>4976977
Looks great just want to say I'd give him a stronger jaw since darius has very square Chad face

[Anonymous No.4981805]

Can I get critique with the rendering in this one

[DrGreen No.4982103]

>>4978793
I think you're trying to tackle too many things with too little experience. I would break things down and work on them separately.

Try working and figure drawing, anatomy, gesture etc... Then work on backgrounds and color, perspective, values, composition. It will all come with time.

Try planning out your scenes with quick, small thumbnail sketches. They don't have to be super detailed or polished, just get general placement, perspective, mood, etc.. down.

Here's my take on it. I started with some reference and did a few quick sketches and narrowed it down to this one.

[DrGreen No.4982124]

>>4979215
All the fundamentals are there, it looks good as is. I'm not going to really nitpick anything beyond /beg/ or /int/, but if I were to change anything it would be some of the anatomy on the arms, hands, and legs...and the form shadows are too sharp for my liking.

Good values and colors though.

[DrGreen No.4982161]

>>4979233
I'd really work on my anatomy and how to properly foreshorten body parts. It's looking pretty wonky right now. Also, are you using good refs for the character?

Here's what I would fix.

[Anonymous No.4982181]

Ah fuck it I need feedback, this is the last thing I put significant time and effort into. My values are muddled, the form and gesture boring and I dont get on with the 'clean line then flat colour' method too well, but making it painterly and trying to cut the shapes and silhouette ends up even more muddled and vague. I like the thumbnail sketches and value roughs you did for your redlines, do you have any tips for efficient workflow?
Thanks for all the advice you've given so far.

[DrGreen No.4982244]

>>4979277
It's not bad, I would just work on nailing down your anatomy here and there. Specifically when you're foreshortening figures. The top two: the one on left, I think the head is facing us too straight on, I would tilt it down a bit. The one on the right the torso is mangled.
Also, try not to use pure white and black on skin when rendering. Especially dark skin...check out some refs. Hope that helps.

[DrGreen No.4982393]

>>4979311
I'm not a big fan of the side mouth anime style, that's what I would change along with anatomy, proportions (like>>4979346 anon).

Push the contrast between the shadow and light. It's too similar right now.
Otherwise its okay.

[DrGreen No.4982448]

>>4979783
Like others said, some anatomy issues (legs, back, stomach, and the rendering could use some work. Looks like there is a lightsource, but some of your forms are not being lit properly. The brushwork could be better as well.

[DrGreen No.4982554]

>>4979881
It feels like she's too close to him. Her lower body is either under his or something weird is going on. Here's what I would do. I drew his whole body to help figure out where he is in space.

[Anonymous No.4982561]

[DrGreen No.4982564]

>>4980058
The face is not too bad, the body definitely needs work. Overall it's too long and disproportionate. Either widen the torso or shorten the whole thing. The hands need to be figure out.

Here's my take.

[Anonymous No.4982733]

I don't know how to draw pregnant women.

[Anonymous No.4982755]

>>4982733
looks good to me

[Anonymous No.4982764]

Redline this.

[Anonymous No.4982765]

>>4982733
She looks fat instead of pregnant.

[Anonymous No.4982810]

>>4976562
>what to do?

[Anonymous No.4982904]

>>4982810

[Anonymous No.4982907]

>>4982904
Oh god. Is this a furry prompt?

[Anonymous No.4982910]

>>4982161
Actually that was a chair not her ass. But thanks for it anyways.

[Anonymous No.4982933]

>>4982910
Anon I..

[Anonymous No.4983331]

>>4979507
Alright, decided to actually fix the design and looking at muscular women for reference. Can I get a redline of this since it is my first time drawing buff women?

[Anonymous No.4983334]

[Anonymous No.4984092]

My brain just cant anymore

[Anonymous No.4984236]

>>4981263
Not bad, but I think you're losing definition in your anatomy... and those claw hands aren't doing you a favor. Study up your own hands a bit and learn the proportions.

The face and hair could use work as well. The eyes are different shapes and sizes, the lips are a bit flat and the hair has lines on it that don't help with defining form.

[Anonymous No.4984243]

learning to render/colour

[Anonymous No.4984249]

>>4976562
help pls

[Anonymous No.4984260]

>>4979311
Trump supporters are pedos?

[Anonymous No.4984266]

>>4984260
it'd make more sense with a biden sign. huh?

[Anonymous No.4984274]

>>4977141
his left temple is going on vacation

[Anonymous No.4984282]

>>4984266
one does not exclude the other

[Anonymous No.4984284]

>>4981497
What is the pose doing? Is she walking, leaning back against a wall, balancing on one leg? Right now I don't think it makes much sense.

I tried going by the character design and had her lean back, kind of observing the scene.

[Anonymous No.4984390]

>>4982181
For values, try working in black and white thumbnails first. Keep them small and loose, and do like 10. Then see which one you like. When you do your final painting, do the same, stay small first and keep comparing to your earlier thumbnail.

Are you working on one layer? Why don't you like cleaning up lines and painting on top on a separate layer?

My workflow is pretty bad. I do a bunch of small value thumbnails, then choose 3, then clean them up a bit, then choose the best one. I keep that one on the side while I do my final size.

Your values are not bad, you'll get better with doing those thumbnails. I think it has some potential for story. Here's what I came up with.

[Anonymous No.4984392]

>>4982764

[DrGreen No.4984403]

>>4982810
It's cool that you're trying to go for symmetry but I think her features are not at the right angles. Her face looks straight on, while her nose is too upturned.

I adjusted her face and neck a bit.

[DrGreen No.4984425]

>>4982561
I would just work on getting the figure right and maybe simplify it altogether. For shading, pick a lightsource and try to get some depth from the shadow shapes.

[DrGreen No.4984431]

>>4982733
I think it's fine, maybe stick the belly button out more. Here's what I'd do.

[DrGreen No.4984446]

Completely forgot these.

>>4979412
I'd keep going with fundies and maybe focus on the figure. Your gestures not bad and with practice you'll get the proper shapes in the figure.

>>4979491
Same thing just keep grinding those figures and you'll get comfortable with the anatomy. Idk if she's supposed to be really suffering or if you meant it how it is. I think it would be cool to add to story to show how much pain she's in.

[Anonymous No.4984465]

>>4976562

[DrGreen No.4984474]

>>4983331
Like the face, cute. I think you're getting there, just keep going with the muscle girl studies.

>>4981805
I like your other one better, but this one has potential. I like the colors and the design. Work on your feet and hands some more. It'll bring your work up a level.

Here's what mine.

[DrGreen No.4984498]

>>4984243
There's some anatomy stuff I see that I would fix. Especially the face. I like your hand shapes though.

>>4984249
Looks like you might be drawing from a reference but not quite able to figure out how the muscles connect and their shape. I'd just study anatomy a bit to get that down.

[DrGreen No.4984522]

>>4983334
It's cute, I like it. I would work out some of the folds on the clothing. The stripes could wrap around the forms a bit better, and the hands could be more interesting. I think you might be flattening the fingers by making that outline around the hands. When fingers overlap, they create a bumpy contour.

[DrGreen No.4984524]

>>4984092
Hey I like this. So far so good, keep going!

[DrGreen No.4984527]

>>4984465
It's cool, I like it. Is this finished, or are you going to clean it up more?

[Anonymous No.4984540]

>>4984527
Proof of concept for another project

[Anonymous No.4984568]

>>4984446
Thanks so much anon. I drew the girl being stabbed. In the image I was trying to portray shock and betrayal, I'll keep at it with the anatomy.

[Anonymous No.4984585]

>>4979215
blog? Twitter?

[Anonymous No.4984631]

>>4984390
>full redraw
>legit viable advice
Do you know how based you are? I'm gonna take this to heart dude thank you very much. Share your social media accs or whatever you have so we can show some appreciation. Do you draw professionally?

[Anonymous No.4984642]

[Anonymous No.4984690]

>>4978826
It's adequate for newcomers. Nobody needs a master redlining their int drawings.

>>4979215
Good vibes

[Anonymous No.4984731]

>>4978826
No one is ever a master. OP may not be the best art educator there is but they're still doing something positive here. I'm willing to bet they're learning in the process as well. Win-win.

[Anonymous No.4984764]

Trying to break away from always doing front on perspective and currently failing miserably, any crit would be appreciated if you're still around OP

[Anonymous No.4984772]

>>4984498
Awesome, thanks dude

[Anonymous No.4984860]

>>4982124
>>4984585
Actually it was just bait. Og artist is that 13 year old Achoosi

[DrGreen No.4985008]

>>4984631
Thanks, really appreciate the kind words. I try to post here every now and then https://twitter.com/aphantomclaw..
I used to do this for a living a while back.

>>4984731
Tbh, I'm learning a ton doing these and each one is a challenge.

>>4984860
Still neat to try...don't know if my crit made a difference.

[Anonymous No.4985183]

>>4976734
>>4976787
Something about the placement of that dick bothers me...

[Anonymous No.4985245]

>>4984431
Mm I see it now. Thanks mate

[Anonymous No.4985266]

>>4984764

[Anonymous No.4985585]

so uh, I have this pose and the guy is turning in his chair. been trying to put the muscles seeing if that works but it's a weird pose.

[Anonymous No.4985627]

>>4979397
Not OP but I love your colors.

[Anonymous No.4985634]

Why is profile view so difficult for me? What am I missing?

[Anonymous No.4985696]

>>4976562

[DrGreen No.4985723]

>>4985585
I think you're almost there. What bothers me the most is his back twist is so extreme while his neck is not. Usually the neck and head twist the most.
The perspective of the chair and table is kind of throwing me off too. Ignore the ref pics, I was trying to wrap my head around the twist.

[Anonymous No.4985736]

Roast me OP.

[Anonymous No.4985747]

>>4985723
cheers mate. And yea perspective throws me off like hell

[Anonymous No.4985756]

>>4976734
penis is far too high up and thigh should cover more, just fucking remove it

[Anonymous No.4985759]

>>4976941
a more diverse background, don’t keep it vanilla

[Anonymous No.4985762]

>>4979215
line work around eye isn’t as crisp as the rest, looks like you had someone else do it

[DrGreen No.4985770]

>>4984642
I think it's okay. I would change way the clothes wrap around the waist and legs a bit, don't think it's at the right perspective.

[Anonymous No.4985776]

>>4985770
OP, post your art, love the angular style

[Anonymous No.4985823]

OP, just passing by to thank you for your work. I'm learning quite a bit analyzing those.

[DrGreen No.4985824]

>>4984764
It's not bad. Are you drawing the whole body before cropping? It helps when doing different perspective. I would even draw a rough grid for the ground to kind of ground the figures.

I not the best at this angle either, but here ya go hope it helps.

[Anonymous No.4985829]

[Anonymous No.4985841]

>>4985829
not op but work on your ears. they are parallel to the brow and nose

[DrGreen No.4985847]

>>4985634
>>4985634
Study up on what's underneath the skin, should help you with drawing the head in general. And look into simplifying the shape so you can understand the big planes.

[Anonymous No.4985851]

Earlier thing I did, might redraw it later when I get better at anatomy

[Anonymous No.4985876]

>>4985696
GET OUT OF THERE S.T.A.L.E.R.S.!

[Anonymous No.4985912]

>>4985723
so uh, i decided to change the angle because it wasn't reading well in context. here's a newer angle. thoughts?

[C.T.A.Л.К.E.P No.4986514]

>>4985876
Attention anecdote!

[Anonymous No.4986633]

trying this thread cuz another thread wasn't of any help. critique/redline please? for context it's Jyushimatsu Matsuno wearing Jotaro Kujo's part 3 coat and hat!

[Anonymous No.4986660]

>>4982244
hey thanks man, thats really cool! :)

[Anonymous No.4986714]

[Anonymous No.4986756]

>>4986714

[Anonymous No.4986829]

>>4986714
Footjob with extra tongue

[Anonymous No.4987023]

[Anonymous No.4987036]

How am i doing Redline-kun?

[Anonymous No.4987594]

[Anonymous No.4987743]

>>4987036
you question marked your own work, so go and study some fucking anatomy so you understand the things you KNOW you don't understand at present

how lazy can you get jesus fucking christ

[Anonymous No.4987748]

[Anonymous No.4987750]

>>4987748
sorry for the quality btw. absolute ass. :(

[Anonymous No.4987755]

made this christmas card for a secret santa for /tg/

[Anonymous No.4987764]

>>4987743
And you think what am i doing? Maybe you read op. I posted here for redline and advice.

[Anonymous No.4987780]

>>4987764
you want him to fix your shit for you instead of fixing it yourself, yes

a valid redline is for someone who can't see the issues with his own drawing. if you question mark your shoulder, you are seeing issues with your shoulder, and you know that your understanding of the anatomy in that area is weak. so you have two options:

a. learn the anatomy of the fucking shoulder, which you already know you should
or b. post it here and wait for someone else to fix it for you

one option is gmi, one is ngmi. take your pick and carry on

[Anonymous No.4987910]

>>4987780
what if i eat cookie and remain cookie?

[Anonymous No.4987923]

>>4976562
Please help me with the shoulder, I've tried for ages to get the anatomy of the left shoulder right but I can' seem to get it. somebody else really helped me with the butt, which was in worse condition than this before.

[DrGreen No.4988030]

>>4985696
Cool concept, I think it could use some breathing room.
Here's what I came up with. Story-wise, it would be cool to have the egg thing as the main focal point, then the guy in the foreground . This composition might also help with directing our eye a bit. I also changed the values up a bit. It's super rough I know, but I hope it gets the idea across. The light tendrils I just added for fun, like the egg is infecting the area or something. I stuck with your color scheme for the most part.

[Anonymous No.4988093]

>>4988030
Not him but this is amazing design and extremely appealing yet simple

[DrGreen No.4988100]

>>4985736
Any reason for the space on the sides? Are you planning on adding anything?

I think the pose could use work. The anatomy and some of the wrap arounds are flattening the form. I would go for dramatic lighting in this case, but that's just my preference. Kinbaku usually has some strong shadows...good refs too.

[Anonymous No.4988102]

>>4988100
wtf, who are you and what do you gain by helping the fags here?

[DrGreen No.4988106]

>>4985183
Yeah, I realized mine is still way too high as well.

>>4985776
Thanks, I sometimes post here https://twitter.com/aphantomclaw

>>4985912
Much better. Any reason why you still want to twist the upper body more than head and neck?

>>4988093
Thanks

>>4988102
Just been lurking for too long and decided to post, help, and maybe learn along the way. Motivates me to keep practicing.

[Anonymous No.4988273]

Hi guys, I'm working on this piece for a client. I like it so far but do appreciate some help from you all. I wanna deliver the best so any tip will help me tons.
Thanks a lot!
IRL ref: https://files.catbox.moe/38eqli.jpg

[Anonymous No.4988279]

>>4988273
Hmm, I think you got this. The only things I would probably change is the tip of the cock looks a bit withered and maybe the balls should hang loose more.

[Anonymous No.4988506]

>>4988273
I'd also mirror that dick, its facing the wrong way. looks cool though...

[Anonymous No.4989373]

Tried to do those to get more loose with drawings and better at sketching but the end result is atrocious compared to my finished drawings. Also, would you recommend to study gesture and anatomy first or composition and linework since I generally know people around here are aware of my art? I started practicing gesture recently but I have a lot to learn in terms of proportions

[Anonymous No.4989497]

>>4989373
I responded to you in the other thread already, study all of them but start with anatomy. There's no use in composing something that's fundamentally broken, composition is a secondary fundamental that comes after understanding basic form, and the same can be said of linework - no linework will save your bulbous muscle approximations from looking bad

[Anonymous No.4989618]

>>4976562

i would like your feedback

[Anonymous No.4989647]

please

[Anonymous No.4989776]

been drawing for almost a month so far

[Anonymous No.4989831]

>>4988106
He's looking at someone that appears at the right. I wanted it to be conveyed as an immediate twist. If it's too relaxed then the body language would fall flat lol

I'm done with the page tho, going to try other pages. thanks again for the feedback

[Anonymous No.4989850]

>>4989776
(x) doubt

[Anonymous No.4989862]

>>4989850
Im a neet and Ive got bored of video games so now I draw for like 8-10 hours a day.
This is one of the first things Ive tried drawing

[Anonymous No.4989871]

>>4989862
absolutely baste, keep going anon
you're gonna get crabbed hard by a lot of people on this board so honestly for your own sake keep the time to yourself and just post the work

[Anonymous No.4990176]

>>4989831
>Look at this stupid fucking cat loli I found lol

[Anonymous No.4990935]

Hi anon, could you give me some pointers regarding joints? I know there's a lot wrong with the picture but I think the joints stand out the most for me.

[Anonymous No.4990958]

>>4990935
Head too big
Don't bend arm bones

[Anonymous No.4990995]

>>4990935
You need lots more anatomy and proportions, which will resolve what you think is a "joint" problem

[Anonymous No.4991731]

>>4985829
For some reason this kind of reminds me of early French comics. It's refreshing to see. I would definitely work on proportions and appeal more. Right now it still feels kind of generic. I like your like variation though, feels like ink.

>>4985851
Reminds me of Samurai Jack a bit. I would work on designing the character more. Anatomy is definitely good to learn, but you would benefit more if you focused on proportions and what makes a good design stand out. Carmen Sandiego has some nice simplified designs as well.

[Anonymous No.4991784]

>>4986633
I think the way the jacket fits the body doesn't really make sense. It's supposed to be way oversized, but it hugs the sides of the body somehow.

>>4986714
I tried, but it's hard to redline perfection.

[Anonymous No.4991800]

You REALLY want /BEG/s to post on this thread? Ok. I did this in 2 days. Go ham.

[Anonymous No.4991811]

Please help me troubleshoot my apparently horrendous anatomy. On /beg/ I was called bait...

[Anonymous No.4991875]

>>4978826
Help or stfu

[Anonymous No.4991940]

Anything huh? Go on then redline my landscape

[Anonymous No.4992474]

The legs and body i can't figure it out!

[Anonymous No.4992522]

i'm mostly looking for painting advice.
is there anyway to improve this shitshow

[Anonymous No.4992554]

>>4991731
thank you for your time and input, I greatly appreciate it, and I wish you luck with your art anon

[Anonymous No.4992555]

>>4991800
>>4991940
>>4992474
>>4992522
I dunno if it's the same anon who redlines all of this, but if he does he actually benefits a lot.

[Anonymous No.4992567]

>>4979346
The fucking dick lmao.

[Anonymous No.4992574]

>>4992555
Seriously I think I learn a lot from giving advice. They say to teach something you have to be able to truly understand it. When you show someone something you thought you knew it shows the gaps in your knowledge. Sacrifice other begs, give begs advice as a beg, fuck em all

[Anonymous No.4993231]

>>4991784
man, i already finished it but thanks for the red line! i'll try to improve next time i draw oversized clothing

[Anonymous No.4993318]

>>4992574
You can't teach someone if you just have a vague idea of the subject. It really forces you to restructure your thoughts in a coherent way.

[Anonymous No.4993497]

>>4979215
arent you too young to be posting on 4chan?

[Anonymous No.4993621]

>>4992474
New redline anon.
I think her head is 10% too small. Boobs too high. Close arm too thick, other arm missing a piece near the knee.

[Anonymous No.4993742]

>>4991811
My anatomy isn't the best but I tried to redraw your sketch.
Same anon as above.

[Anonymous No.4993833]

>>4979215
>>4993497
>>4985762

Read -> >>4984860

[Anonymous No.4993894]

>>4991800
Why don't her torso and belt/skirt line up?
Same anon as last two.

[Anonymous No.4993943]

>>4993742
Thank you anon! This is actually super helpful

[Anonymous No.4993977]

>>4992522
Left is just a few edits like the nose and putting some add (glow) on the skin. Right I tried painting over a bit + liquifying.

[Anonymous No.4993990]

>>4987923
Same anon as the last few. I don't really know about shoulders in this position but yours looks like it's collapsing into the back.

[Anonymous No.4994015]

>>4982554
Oh man you're great, thank you!

[Anonymous No.4994261]

>>4989618
I'm not that good with female bodies but your drawing looks like a trace of a real person because the proportions don't look anime. Generally the ribcage/torso in anime is drawn smaller. Also look up the shape of arms for the arm that's saluting, it's pretty easy for anime girls because they don't have much muscle so the shape doesn't change very much.

[Anonymous No.4994556]

I know there's a lot of mistakes but what should I improve initially.

[Anonymous No.4994794]

>>4993621
ahh thank you

i will do better next time!

[Anonymous No.4994975]

I'll try it out. The arms are fucked beyond, but I'd appreciate a redline

[Anonymous No.4994989]

[Anonymous No.4995105]

[Anonymous No.4995132]

>>4991731
Thank you for the critique. I'll make sure to work on anatomy more in my spare time.

[Anonymous No.4995172]

>>4994989
pweease critiqueee meeee *-*

[Anonymous No.4995352]

The leg on the back is supposed to be completely extended, for extra thrust power

[Anonymous No.4995858]

>>4987036
Keep going to your anatom/figure studies. You will get there anon. I'd focus on shoulders, hands, feet, and heads. But you should work on the whole body and figure out how everything connects.

>>4987594
bonner/10

>>4987748
It's cute. The eyes are different shapes and the lower part of the face could use work. The ears are really high up too, they typically line up with the nose.

[Anonymous No.4995978]

[Anonymous No.4996009]

>>4987755
Going forward, I'd work on the hands and face. Your hands are a little sausage looking and the pose is unnatural. The eyes and nose look like you might be guessing their shape. It's a tough pose to get right, especially since it's so straight on. To get the foreshortening and the perspective of the box to feel natural will need some ref.

>>4987923
Yep, this anon is right>>4993990
You seem to be missing the deltoid wrapping around her scapula. I'd work out the folds a bit too. They seem kind of random right now. Her upper legs might be too long and the shoe shape could

[Anonymous No.4996069]

>>4982910
It's 3 am, my neighbours probably hate me, because i'm laughing out of loud like a retard.

[Anonymous No.4996083]

>>4982910
holy fuck

[Anonymous No.4996118]

>>4988273
Like others have said, her dong sticks out. It's at a different angle than the rest of her body. I really like the butt in the ref, would be cool to get more of the bottom curve and weight like the pic. The the lighting could use some work too. Here's my take.

>>4989373
It's not too bad, just keep going with the loose sketches. Depends on what you want to do. Landscapes, city scenes, storyboarding, environments, vis dev, study composition. If you want to get good at drawing people, study figure drawing, long and short poses, gesture, anatomy, body in perspective.

[Anonymous No.4996154]

Dunno if you're still doing, but I'd appreciate it.

[DrGreen No.4996209]

>>4989618
This anon put it well, the proportions look real, while the head is stylized.

>>4989647
Looks pretty cool. Why cut off at the wrists though? The monke legs are off. I'd check some refs to see how they use their tail. I think it would curl all the way around her arm.
I would change the white highlights to something else, right now it's the same as her neck and arm lines.The ribcage and hip lines are kind of harsh, I would soften a bit.

[Anonymous No.4996275]

>>4979233
>>4982161
>>4982910
>>4996069
FUCKING KEK

[Anonymous No.4996301]

>>4985759 >>4976941
>diverse
yeah, why isn't the background filled with mulattoes? WE NEED ANSWERS ANON

[Anonymous No.4996459]

>>4993990
>>4996009
thank you

[DrGreen No.4996552]

>>4989776
If this is the same anon, I actually like this one more >>4989862
The gestures better, theres some flow, and the design looks more appealing. Try to stay away from dead on flat povs unless you want to deliberately flatten your composition.

Here's my take

[DrGreen No.4996580]

>>4990935
What everyone else has said. I'd keep doing figure drawings and try timing yourself so you don't get lost in details. You will get there!
Here's how I'd do it.

[Anonymous No.4996589]

>>4991800

[DrGreen No.4996618]

>>4991800
>>4993742
Second one does feel like bait...I'll bite anyway.

For both, just keep grinding fundies. Keep in mind that you're learning and try to actively learn why you're doing what you're doing. Figure studies, time yourselves, do quick gestures 1m-3m, longer poses 10m-20m. Observe people around you and draw from life when you can.

[DrGreen No.4996637]

>>4991940
I really like this, the texture is really cool. It's fine as is...would be cool to see maybe some cast shadows to break up the solid pink. Just my personal preference though.

[Anonymous No.4996666]

>>4996589
>>4996618
BLOG? I NEED BLOG THIS IS TOP-TIER SHIT GIVE ME BLOG SENPAI

[Anonymous No.4996711]

>>4996118
Thanks a lot for your help, anon! Means a lot that you took the time to help others improve.

[Anonymous No.4996722]

>>4976566
Her hand looks fucked up, other than that's she a beauty

[Anonymous No.4996963]

>>4976562
This is the type of stuff I love seeing in ic, instead od people calling others beg or ngmi. Where all here to improve and I hate how it's mostly pointless drabble.

[Anonymous No.4997012]

>>4976562
Here's a character from a story I want to draw (but am too lazy too)

[Anonymous No.4997104]

>>4979306
>too big lower body
what do you mean? it's perfect as it is

[Anonymous No.4997544]

>>4996209
>>4994261


thanks for the tip anons

[Anonymous No.4997902]

>>4976562

[Anonymous No.4997965]

Any crit on this comic practice sketch? (Read right to left)

[Anonymous No.4997996]

>>4976860
Whatever you do, don't mix your colors with black, it gives your colors a muddy look, which doesn't look good. You can use black if it's pure black, like in comics, or if ou're doing a black and white drawing, obviously. If you don't agree, just try both, and you will quickly reach a conclusion.

[Anonymous No.4998076]

>>4996209
thank you

[Anonymous No.4998469]

>>4996552
I think Im gonna try to redraw that ballerina pose character with your advice, should be pretty fun to revisit the first thing you tried

[Anonymous No.4998490]

[Anonymous No.4998495]

>>4998490
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NWKox3AH5QM

[Anonymous No.4998526]

>>4998469
Dont redline this, I realized the problems but the post is too old to delete

[Anonymous No.4998597]

im trying to artfag but its tough

[Anonymous No.4998747]

>>4979215
Fuck you cho

[Anonymous No.4998780]

>>4998597
This is pretty much where I am, I feel it.

[Anonymous No.4998806]

>>4998597
the pose is dynamic anon and you have the right idea about the volumes themselves, you just need more milage and refining your skill / more in depth attempts at getting the anatomy down. I like what you did with the front leg with the contours going over the upper leg and the planning of the drawing from the gesture up

[Anonymous No.4998832]

>>4978826
fuck off whiny retard, the man knows his stuff

[Anonymous No.4998835]

>>4998806
god i love you, no one sees the gesture at all sometimes

[Anonymous No.4998856]

I can't even imagine how to draw hands.

[Anonymous No.4998883]

>>4993621
>>4992474

back again! my next one!

I feel like the lowerbody need something

[Anonymous No.4999316]

>>4998835
idk if you are the anon that posted the pciture I commented on, but you have to push it further, and make the gesture longer. here it is marked line of action, which is similar but not identical to the gesture.. good luck anon

[Anonymous No.4999886]

>>4998883
The rendering is pretty off in this one and the right shoulder looks dislocated, but the figure and base colours are nice.

Where is the light coming from? If it's top right her right arm and the side of her body should be brightly lit

[Anonymous No.4999890]

>>4998469
>>4998526
Actual finished one now

[Anonymous No.4999924]

>>4999886
Oh i kinda just threw the a red blush around as a base, there no rendering yet, i just need to figure out the anatomy before i begin

[Anonymous No.4999925]

>>4999890
If you insist to cover the hands in your draws, you never gonna learn how to draw hands correctly. You need fail trying to draw hands.

[Anonymous No.4999937]

>>4999925
Oh I know, Its just the kind of pose I had in mind. My next piece is going be a character in a ballerina-like pose so Ill have fun with that
The eye covering the hair thing was an accident, I just had forgotten about that detail until I started to do the details on her head

[Anonymous No.4999950]

Based OP. I wont shit on furries from now on.

[Anonymous No.5000101]

>>4997012

[Anonymous No.5000282]

Posted in a /beg/ thread and got a little bit of stuff fixed. Mouth is purposefully animal like.

[Anonymous No.5000500]

anyone wanna fix my shit it's really stiff and I don't kno why. lost motivaion to finish would not mind a redline. arms look retarded

[Anonymous No.5000515]

what's with all the futa fags

[Anonymous No.5000789]

>>4999924
Ah I see, I'd probs apply blush as a final touch after the rending but maybe your way will work out fine.

Here's what I'd do with the shoulder but I'm not great at this so some other anon might berate me for it.

[Anonymous No.5000800]

>>5000101
Bro, that's awesome and closer to what I had in mind

[Anonymous No.5000801]

>>4998856
They seem pretty good

[Anonymous No.5000803]

[Anonymous No.5000872]

Can you do mine? To be honest i feel pretty good about it.

[Anonymous No.5000984]

Redline bros,

How do I put characters into perspective. Specifically their feet? I feel like if I could just plant their feet I would be able to go from there.

[Anonymous No.5001054]

>>5000984
Draw the top plane of a cube, use that as the ground plane for your feet and gogogo

[Anonymous No.5001084]

>>5001054
Could you apply so I know how fucked it is?

[Anonymous No.5001088]

>>4997012
>>4997902
>>4997965
>>4998469
>>4998490
>>4998597
>>4998856
>>4998883
>>4999890
>>5000500
>>5000789
>>5000803
>>5000872
>>5001084
Noone is going to redline.
God is dead.

[Anonymous No.5001994]

>>4976562
i feel like i fucked the pelvis area up for the left side

[Anonymous No.5002050]

>>5001088
I can't blame him. Guy can't babyfeed forever. Just wish I had gotten in sooner.

[Anonymous No.5002097]

>>4982910
LMAO nice

[Anonymous No.5002162]

>>5000500
Was busy drawing my own thing but I can redline more now.
I don't know how anime boobs work so I'm not going to redline that but that hand is kinda fat. Make sure the wrist is boxy.

[Anonymous No.5002189]

smash my face in

its a lalafell from final fantasy

[Anonymous No.5002220]

>>4998856
The eyes are too close and for the hands, use reference (I googled "playing with guitar pick")
The wrinkles on the bottom half of the sleeve shouldn't look like random triangles, do it more like how you drew the wrinkles on the top half.

[Anonymous No.5002268]

>>4999890
>>4999890
The torso is still probably too long but I can't be bothered, maybe someone else will redraw it better.

[Anonymous No.5002289]

>>5001084
I don't know how to draw it right on paper but I tried liquifying it into what I think would look good.

[Anonymous No.5002391]

>>5002268
Thanks a ton

[Anonymous No.5002478]

>>5000282
Were the boobs like that on purpose? Looked very high up.

[Anonymous No.5002494]

>>5002189
Liquified it. It's at a weird angle.

[Anonymous No.5002503]

>>4997902
Read a guide on how folds work and use reference. Looks like he has tumors on his chest. Shoes literally look like shit because of the shading.

[Anonymous No.5002515]

>>5002494
That's actually pretty enlightening, thank you

[Anonymous No.5002553]

>>5001994
I didn't know how to interpret the blue part but something is sure. You have to being careful with the proportions in general.

I recommend studying anatomy since you don't know how the muscles of the body works or where they are located.

And practice the cleaning of your line.

[Anonymous No.5002570]

>>5000803

[Anonymous No.5004811]

>>4995172
critique what?