Hey /ic/ I am doing a mural for some children's home. The feedback I gotten is that the bees I painted, are too fierce, does it look aggressive? If so, how do I make it looks more friendly?

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Anonymous Mon May 6 00:59:20 2019 No.3919820 [Reply] [Original]

Hey /ic/

I am doing a mural for some children's home.

The feedback I gotten is that the bees I painted, are too fierce, does it look aggressive? If so, how do I make it looks more friendly?

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 01:36:56 2019 No.3919842 either remove teeth or stylize the teeth one solid bar

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 01:38:35 2019 No.3919844 >>3919842 How about the eyes? I have some feedback about the eyes because of how they are accustomed to eyes with one circle in the iris as reflection. Mine was more of a 1930 cartoon eyes.

Anonymous Mon May 6 01:56:50 2019 No.3919851
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>>3919844
sounds about right. or increase shine size/amount.
personally, I appreciate the look your going for and wouldn't have you change it. do you happen to post on instagram?

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 02:32:38 2019 No.3919874 >>3919820 Dude wtf is with those creepy faces If you smile, your eyes crinkle up, hence the ^-^ face Never draw again.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 03:15:06 2019 No.3919896 bees from hell lol

Anonymous Mon May 6 04:17:29 2019 No.3919932
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>>3919820
Look some Maya the bee or something dude.

The bees you drew look like they flew straight from a tumblr and on some heavy diversity shit and about to sting each other in the ass or announce fight about stereotypes and stop pollinate flower because its insectist or something.

Those bees with gapped smiles and large glassy eyes look like they are doing coke and not nectar.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 05:46:14 2019 No.3919990 >>3919820 I think they look pretty cute, though reminding me of a boss from cuphead.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 05:54:21 2019 No.3919996 >>3919851 yes i post on instagram everyday. Gonna draw some bees lmao

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 05:57:03 2019 No.3919999 >>3919851 >>3919932 These bees are better

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 06:00:29 2019 No.3920004 >>3919874 Imma stab you with my palette knife. And then send my bees to rape you while you sleep.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 06:30:39 2019 No.3920011 >>3919999 Alright, I'll take that as my bees are not good enough for some reason. Clearly.

Anonymous Mon May 6 07:57:55 2019 No.3920081

>>3920011
Its not that they are not good enough, I think its more about the fact that face expression look like they are high (you probably aimed at cuphead wacky) and they would probably looked ok at a pub or something but kids prefer something calmer, more normal, your feedback was precise, it just didnt explained why do they look fierce.
Again, look Maya the bee.

Also, body features are a bit underdeveloped.
I know its a bee and there is not much going on but still.

I wonder if you could add something to background, summer house or camp or river.

Anyway, you are the artist and its your art so you decide how you gonna defierce them.
You dont have to copy Maya the Bee or turn them anthropomorphic, just think of something, try drawing actual bee to see what can be added or improved.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 08:20:57 2019 No.3920100 >>3919820 OP, i'm seeing something that could be misinterpreted. the flowers have faces, right? so there's that female bee sitting on the flower's face with a satisfied look in her face. that could be kind of weird for an adult.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 08:23:47 2019 No.3920103 >>3920100 lmao I just noticed that

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 08:40:04 2019 No.3920112 >>3920100 kek

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 08:44:47 2019 No.3920114 >>3920011 They are good anon, but they are creepy good, too creepy for a kids mural. The teeth look creepy being spaced apart like that. Also, the bee in the bottom right looks high as hell

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 08:46:52 2019 No.3920119 >>3919820 Did you just draw bees on a James jean sketch?

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 08:47:16 2019 No.3920120 >>3919820 The right one is train' to get sum fuck, that's the only one that standed out for me, I like what you're going for

Anonymous Mon May 6 12:31:58 2019 No.3920390

>>3920081
Thanks, honestly I didn't want to draw anthropomorphic bees, I however wanted to make a 1:3 ratio with the bees.

all 1930 cartoon look high as fuck LOL, probably why they are so amazing for me.

>>3920100
That is what I learnt from disney.

>>3920120
hopefully I get to do more of this stuff, with higher quality, more fine-arts or commercial arena.

>>3920119
It is james jean and hokusai, a touch of 1930 cartoons and disney.

Anonymous Mon May 6 12:36:44 2019 No.3920397
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I did 6 new version of bees, even threw in takashi murakami.

everything is so fucking out of shape, i officially dislike 0.5 micron pens. Ink brush gets a more flow lines.

Okay~ tentatively, these are the new bee designs. I will create better shapes out of the initial design, which one you like and why!

Once the selection process is done, I will do a second round of redrawing on the new design! will update soon!

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 13:08:42 2019 No.3920445 >>3919820 I'm not a fan of rubbethose faces I personally think if you were to change the bees you could make them cuter and have simpler faces. https://gyazo.com/904a44de01fcc1da60c00e6a511cc66e Nice flowers

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 13:09:34 2019 No.3920448 >>3920390 Gross man, why are you just copying someone else's art? Is someone paying you for that?

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 13:09:44 2019 No.3920450 >>3920397 top right is perfect

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 13:11:42 2019 No.3920454 >>3920397 bottom middle and bottom right are alright top middle looks like a bee pepe

Anonymous Mon May 6 13:14:29 2019 No.3920459
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>>3920397
These are all still creepy to be quite honest. If you want to make these bees look cute and nontreatenening stick to the principles of cute character design: big foreheads and low mouths. The eyes and mouth shapes aren't the issue, it's the facial structure.

Anonymous Mon May 6 13:19:22 2019 No.3920466
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>>3920459
And if you really ant to go for that rubberhose style, simplify the features more. More detail is generally going to look less cute on a cartoon character. It's why ovo faces on chibis and the like are popular.

Anonymous Mon May 6 14:16:24 2019 No.3920594

>>3920397
Third on the top row might look good, maybe try to reduce sparkles in eyes (those small dots might clutter it a bit) and the sting because I am not sure if the sting is still too aggressive.
Like "imma gonna fly round the fucking hood and if you fuck with me or my flowers I'll fucking shank you bitch *Angry methead noises"

Apart from that, 1930 style always looked a bit creepy to me, like there is no way to make it less creepy and low detail bees collide with detailed flowers.

Anyway, going to work now, hope to see how this piece develops with time.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 14:38:21 2019 No.3920623 >>3919932 This is a good post, got a laugh out of me

Anonymous Mon May 6 20:07:06 2019 No.3920916
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>>3919820
>>3920397
I understand where they're coming from with the creepiness, I feel the same way. It's the 1930s eyes, mainly the small amount of shininess. I *believe* you should switch to modern cartoon eyes but if that ruins everything 2 seems to fix the issue. 1 and 3 are creepy, 5 and 6 look slightly creepy and break the theme

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 20:15:03 2019 No.3920924 >>3920397 Sorry anon but you have zero sense of appeal.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 20:27:22 2019 No.3920945 File: 391 KB, 1080x1466, I'm feeling fat and sassy.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3920397 I made this with my finger on the phone's note app so it's crummy, but this is my 2 cents. If you want to stay in some sort of old school style

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 20:30:59 2019 No.3920947 >>3920397 Quit the coiled body thing, you don't know how to make it work. Draw a bee like a five year old would, that would be more to your level than this.

Anonymous Mon May 6 20:34:18 2019 No.3920954
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>>3920397
made some edits to the ones you did and also spitballed some random designs that i thought made them look more appealing in my opinion. i believe simplification really is key here

tried to apply the advice of >>3920459 but kinda just ended up fucking off

i think the original is actually pretty cool but it really doesn't fit the style of a "children's home"

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 20:45:32 2019 No.3920964 File: 15 KB, 308x273, 1557118760748.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3919820 LMAO your bees are sex pests in violent frenzy

Anonymous Mon May 6 21:28:41 2019 No.3921000
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>>3919820
Maybe something more like this?
I don't mean do it "exactly" this way, but take consideration on the proportions and the more relaxed expressions. Your bees sort of looked coked up to be frank. Hopefully this helps. c:
I love bees.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 21:29:50 2019 No.3921003 It’s the stinger

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 21:32:57 2019 No.3921006 >>3920445 Yeah, I like the idea of simplifying the shapes. You can see my drawing now is totally out of shape. Pretty bad. >>3920448 All artist copies from someone before them. >>3920454 God Damm, you are right!

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 21:37:03 2019 No.3921012 >>3920459 The thing is. Bees doesn't have nose. And I don't want to create 100% anthropomorphic bee. I think you are on to something. The ratio and the facial structure should change. >>3920466 You are right. Thanks man. I learn something new today!

Anonymous Mon May 6 21:45:06 2019 No.3921025

>>3920594
That got me thinking. I could technically redesign the stinger into something else.

>>3920916
Oh yes, I didn't realize how creepy they are probably because of the artist delusion but now that you mentioned it. I kinda understand it better.

>>3920924
Sense of appeal. How do I get more of that buddy?

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 21:46:13 2019 No.3921026 >>3921000 Woh! this is actually good. I like the way you did the middle bee!

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 21:48:17 2019 No.3921027 >>3920945 Wtf. You draw better than me with your fingers. I am looking to up my fundamental now. Lmao going to to rubberhose practice today.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 21:48:47 2019 No.3921029 >>3921000 nice work anon!

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 22:00:21 2019 No.3921034 >>3921025 >>3921000

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 22:03:13 2019 No.3921037 >>3921006 no dude, theres a huge difference between inspiration and plagiarism

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 22:08:22 2019 No.3921045 >>3921034 Yes I saw it. The middle bee is amazing. I realize she used the mouth of the bee. To create some depth and facial structure. That is chibi cutness. I like it.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 22:12:24 2019 No.3921048 >>3920100 almost choked on cheese and crackers. fucking a, anon.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 22:15:39 2019 No.3921054 >>3921000 I fucking hate you weaboos

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 22:16:44 2019 No.3921055 >>3921037 That is a misconception for many people. Why would you reinvent the wheel? Copying is what we all do, from nature to art yo.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 22:27:20 2019 No.3921063 >>3921054 Calm down yo, if it looks a esthetically pleasing why will you be mad. After all. It is a style. But why do people hate anime tho.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 22:46:43 2019 No.3921090 >>3919820 They look a little too ren and stimpy, maybe find a middle ground with this >>3921000

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 22:50:57 2019 No.3921093 Can I add that the stinger is too large and sharp? Maybe try giving it a more rounded feature instead of so sharp. Parents are paranoid about sharp edges.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 23:19:20 2019 No.3921108 >>3921090 I agree, will do 10 drawings of the bees today. Hopefully it wont turn out to be shit again lmao.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 6 23:22:03 2019 No.3921112 >>3921093 Oh yes, I will think of something else. Thanks!

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 00:36:03 2019 No.3921165 File: 574 KB, 1000x712, bee-1-4chan.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3920947 >draw like a 5 year old okay You are right, I shouldn't try to curve that butt. Still slightly curved because organic shapes.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 00:38:58 2019 No.3921168 >>3921165 /ic/ This is my first draft, I will continue to push more out today, please tell me what you think. I will not stop until I am satisfy. Update soon!

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 01:53:57 2019 No.3921227 >>3921168 Looking forward to it. You're doing great Anon!

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 04:31:58 2019 No.3921335 File: 567 KB, 1000x714, bee-2-chan.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3921227 Probably going to do a few more.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 04:39:14 2019 No.3921338 >>3921165 I suggest you add a little cheek to the smiles, it looks more friendly

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 04:40:55 2019 No.3921339 File: 75 KB, 210x240, 1527351523488.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3921338 like this

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 04:42:56 2019 No.3921340 File: 649 KB, 634x620, 1527551980018.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3921339 Oh look at this. How nice. They keep the button eyes and deliver the expression by showing the line of the cheek under the eyes

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 05:15:42 2019 No.3921352 File: 80 KB, 700x550, 1537031790648.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] making this for fun, this stuff is surprisingly hard

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 05:20:24 2019 No.3921357 File: 80 KB, 700x550, 1542743678243.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3921352 better

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 05:44:57 2019 No.3921379 >>3921357 I kinda don't want hands and legs...

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 06:01:42 2019 No.3921391 >>3920397 I think bottom left is best, it's not weird / creepy.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 06:13:56 2019 No.3921402 >>3921063 the beauty of anime contrasts with the ugliness in their life, and makes it stand out more. they can only enjoy dark and gritty media

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 06:30:24 2019 No.3921423 >>3921402 Oh come on, I am ugly too, doesn't mean I shouldn't draw beautiful things right?

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 06:31:06 2019 No.3921424 File: 558 KB, 1000x710, bee-3-chan.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3921165 First >>3921335 Second This is Third Draft

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 06:36:33 2019 No.3921427 >>3921423 I said ugliness in their life, not necessarily their face

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 07:01:25 2019 No.3921443 File: 118 KB, 1024x684, DZTq9dCW0AA-At5.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] i like bee

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 07:05:50 2019 No.3921447 >>3921055 omg, youll do anything to make yourself feel better about being a talentless art theif.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 07:12:22 2019 No.3921454 >>3921427 well, most people are ugly someways... nobody is perfect my friendo.

Anonymous Tue May 7 07:15:08 2019 No.3921457

>>3921443
God damn, that is actually cool, the eyes looks DOPE AS FUCK.

>>3921447
Well, I am not going to be a post-modernist anus painting "original" artist. I rather be this mindful artist who copy the great masters, a lifelong learning from people who are way better than me. It is humbling, you should try copying.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 07:17:24 2019 No.3921462 >>3921424 anon no

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 07:20:15 2019 No.3921464 >>3921462 I know right, I just don't feel satisfied, I am not saying it is the paper, but it is, i'm using some cheap ass paper, the flow is just not there. Bristol paper is paper of flow, i swear. But oh well.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 07:21:01 2019 No.3921466 I made a bee mascot for a girl in my graphic design class who was a beekeeper. I don't have the drawing anymore but I got comments on how the bee was "really sexy"

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 07:30:19 2019 No.3921472 >>3921466 please share, I need all the help I can get, thanks.

Anonymous Tue May 7 07:43:19 2019 No.3921481
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>>3921472
I don't have it anymore but it was nothing like what you're doing and I made the drawing as a joke, not a real design job. She was heavily anthropomorphized, kind of like Hatchi the bee but more slender and sexy.

Anonymous Tue May 7 07:45:07 2019 No.3921483

>>3921454
you can find ugliness in anything, and just because nothing is perfect that doesnt mean there cant an average of quality. an average implies somebody is below that average. and when you are below average your are defined by your imperfections

lets get back to the origin of our discussion. you might have a face which is considered ugly by humanity, but when making an average of all your defining traits, and if you have a beautiful personality and view on world, then you might average on the beauty side.

To conclude, I never said you shouldnt draw something, or that there is something which defines what you should or should not do. Just said some ppl are so bitter they will hate on anything.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 08:07:52 2019 No.3921496 >>3921466 Fuckin ask her for the drawing and post it.

Anonymous Tue May 7 08:15:32 2019 No.3921506

>>3921481
WOH, bro that is high standard yo, reminds me of studio ghibli! Thanks.

>>3921483
I don't know many people so I can't tell you much. But I consider myself ugly, and one of my reason to pursuit art is because I am ugly. There is beauty in art. Insert red skull meme. hahah

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 08:19:06 2019 No.3921508 File: 572 KB, 1000x710, bee-4-chan.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] 4th draft, I am hungry, angry and going to lift weights. BRB

Anonymous Tue May 7 08:30:47 2019 No.3921522

>>3921508
why do you draw these unnatural serial killer looking grins instead of normal smiles with dimples? it feels like you don't really know how facial expressions work, smiles don't look like that.
It looks like you're making a parody of the calarts bean head meme

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 08:32:49 2019 No.3921526 File: 790 KB, 1100x619, 1540883432687.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3921508 your smiles currently look like this

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 08:44:11 2019 No.3921533 File: 918 KB, 651x800, 1529882822495.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3921526

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 08:49:09 2019 No.3921536 >>3921522 I don't know. I'm working on it. No dimples because it reminds me of someone.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 08:50:12 2019 No.3921538 >>3921533 Lmaoooo thanks. And come one it is just draft.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 08:50:13 2019 No.3921539 >>3921508 please don't give them protruding chins

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 08:50:46 2019 No.3921540 >>3921526 >>3921533 Kek. but seriously op. you need to drop the exaggerated smiles and the flower faces

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 08:51:29 2019 No.3921541 >>3919820 You should ask /co/ for some good bee designs man. Something about these doesn’t look like it’d be very appealing to kids

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 08:53:20 2019 No.3921543 File: 474 KB, 1403x1500, 8D523B65-5FF2-4DA4-93BA-547480965B0E.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3921541 Beez inspired for ya, the mouths you’re using could be less beany and more of a :D

Anonymous Tue May 7 08:55:38 2019 No.3921545

>>3921536
>No dimples because it reminds me of someone.
Anon all human beings have dimples when they smile, it's a result of how the muscles of the face work. And in any case if they hired you to make something appealing for kids you should set your personal feefees aside
and in any case there's a better design that that atrocious bean smile, see >>3921543 these have no dimples and they're cute

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 08:57:29 2019 No.3921547 >>3921543 Thanks, I don't hate Clipart but I am looking for something good. It's hard.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 08:58:03 2019 No.3921548 >>3921457 I noticed you didn't answer me when I asked if someone is paying you to steal art for this mural you're plagiarizing.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 08:58:55 2019 No.3921549 >>3921545 No, not everyone have dimples. Especially fat people like myself. We have 2 marshmallow on our cheeks.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 08:59:42 2019 No.3921550 >>3921547 Yeah I was googling stuff like “Cartoon bees” and surpringly there wasn’t many appealing ones. Do you by any chance have a pic of how you’re going to color the rest of the mural? Like is it going to be softer or more vibrant colors?

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 09:03:03 2019 No.3921556 >>3921548 Lolol plagiarized, I bet you think the only form of art is the kind that requires traditional studies.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 09:04:07 2019 No.3921557 File: 399 KB, 900x600, 1556699963905.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3921549 I don't know what your face looks like but you can clearly see the nasolabial fold

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 09:06:05 2019 No.3921559 >>3921557 Lmao that is me. Stop posting my pics.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 09:07:11 2019 No.3921560 >>3921550 Rocco color scheme

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 09:09:25 2019 No.3921565 >>3921560 Rococo

Anonymous Tue May 7 09:36:50 2019 No.3921583

>>3921565
Are the bees going to be more vibrant or will they match the color scheme? It could look interesting but I think the style you’re using right now for the bees will clash a bit with the color scheme of the image, unless that’s what you’re going for?

Anonymous Tue May 7 10:04:51 2019 No.3921611

>>3921583
Bees in nature don't clash. I'm using more calming colors, apparently to sedate the aggression of the children. I always thought it is counterproductive to do that.

In fact, art that triggers aggression, keep the kids in check. The homes somehow want a more calming color tone.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 12:48:56 2019 No.3921771 >>3919820 Alright I need to sleep, going to do 5 more tomorrow~

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 13:02:17 2019 No.3921788 >>3919820 >this >fierce What? How? Did they offer any explanation? This is the gayest hippiest looking shit

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 13:04:09 2019 No.3921789 I liked the discussion in this thread. Even though it was about how to make OP's bee more appealing to children, it touched a lot about the aesthetics of cute character design.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 13:06:50 2019 No.3921792 >>3921788 bro the bees look like they're going to take a fucking axe to your grandma's face lmao, they're on bath salts.

Anonymous Tue May 7 13:23:15 2019 No.3921808
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>>3921611
>Bees in nature don't clash.
This is ART dude. I'm saying the art style you were using for the bees would clash with the color scheme of the rest of the mural. Also, bees CAN clash in nature, look at this fucking bee in lava and tell me that mother fucker doesn't fucking CLASH

>>	Anonymous Tue May 7 14:36:24 2019 No.3921907 >>3921556 Still dodging the question because you can't stand that you have no talent and are a fucking thief.

Anonymous Tue May 7 15:14:00 2019 No.3921952

>>3921508
I can see you went in a more Ghibli direction with these. Try making the smile like you're doing, but keeping the eyes wide and round. It's a cartoon so the detail of the eyes squinting is too much. But this looks like a better direction than some of the other stuff you were doing. The cuphead 20's cartoons are great, but probably not for this commission.

>>3921543
If you're gonna keep the detail of the eyes then I'd go with the mouth on the bottom right. It's in between the eyes so makes it less creepy.

Hang in there anon!

Anonymous Wed May 8 00:14:29 2019 No.3922601

>>3921789
Actually the kids that watch me sketch it on the wall, they all liked what I did. In fact, they started to name the bees. The one below is the mother bee. And the middle bee is the one they like the most.

>>3921808
I am not sure man, the art style is pretty much the same, it is disney, 1930 cartoons, james jean and houksai.

>>3921907
alright, I am clearly less talented than you.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 8 00:17:36 2019 No.3922606 >>3922601 Kids don't know good art from bad art.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 8 00:17:50 2019 No.3922607 >>3921952 yeah man, I was studying some Ghibli, I am going to simplify it, just for this mural. I don't even make that much for this much of work. LOL but hell with it, this is fun!

>>	Anonymous Wed May 8 00:19:12 2019 No.3922608 >>3922606 You're right. They can't tell, easiest clients.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 8 02:37:19 2019 No.3922706 >>3922601 >And the middle bee is the one they like the most. you mean the one which is not showing its face? that tells a lot

>>	Anonymous Wed May 8 03:07:22 2019 No.3922720 >>3922608 They're not the clients, retard.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 8 03:41:30 2019 No.3922738 >>3922706 >>3922720 Aww, someone is in boo boo mood. How adorable. The kids are the audience, to me, they are the clients. The adults don't understand the kids in the children home. The irony never ends.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 8 03:52:38 2019 No.3922742 File: 88 KB, 304x317, Evicted%21Bee.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3921508 does it really have to be stylized like it was before 2000s?

>>	Anonymous Wed May 8 03:53:15 2019 No.3922743 File: 564 KB, 1000x714, bee-5-chan.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3919820 Alright the 5th fucking draft, I think I am setting soon. Bored.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 8 03:55:34 2019 No.3922746 >>3922742 Oh yeah, adventure time! Come grab your friends~ kek check >>3922743

>>	Anonymous Wed May 8 04:02:26 2019 No.3922754 >>3922738 Funny how you say that when your OP drawing shows you think of kids as some hyperactive creatures hence no respect for them, and then you go ahead and call them the clients.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 8 04:05:41 2019 No.3922755 >>3922754 that's a reach anon, and you know it.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 8 04:13:24 2019 No.3922768 >>3922755 look at the 2 wide open eyes bees in the OP and tell me those are not hyperactive. But Ive seen since then your other drafts, and those got better and better, so theres that.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 8 04:32:42 2019 No.3922785 >>3922743 I think it would look cuter if you didn't separate the head from the body. but that's just my taste

>>	Anonymous Wed May 8 04:40:22 2019 No.3922792 File: 725 KB, 1000x714, BEE.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3922743 I redrew the ones I liked. your client didn't specify what art style they wanted?

>>	Anonymous Wed May 8 08:40:09 2019 No.3922987 >>3922792 best itt

>>	Anonymous Wed May 8 08:55:10 2019 No.3922999 >>3922601 You're not just less talented you have no talent and zero integrity. And I have now asked you 3 times if they're paying you for this piece that you're rationalizing stealing and you haven't once answered the question.

Anonymous Wed May 8 09:11:40 2019 No.3923013

>>3922999
Of cos they are paying me. I don't consider that as stealing tho. Because I am pretty good with drawing. In fact, I didn't stop drawing for about 3 years now. I am also not limited to just these drawings. I do other stuff too. It must have hurt to know if someone like me, could just trace better. LOL

>>	Anonymous Wed May 8 09:13:08 2019 No.3923016 >>3922792 alright, thanks anons, I think i am okay, now, going to send all these to the people for review.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 8 09:14:14 2019 No.3923018 >>3922785 Hey, you are right, it is pretty neckless creatures. lol well, I am bored of bees now. Maybe the next mural!

>>	Anonymous Wed May 8 14:07:00 2019 No.3923378 >>3923016 good job anon, these bees are fine

>>	Anonymous Wed May 8 21:25:33 2019 No.3923925 >>3922792 100x better. good improvement

>>	Anonymous Wed May 8 21:47:05 2019 No.3923946 >>3922999 Lol

>>	Anonymous Wed May 8 22:19:09 2019 No.3923972 >>3921165 this is the best one. the kids are going to be familiar with the style since it's pretty similar to calarts style cartoons. they're expressive and not creepy >>3921508 >>3921424 don't

>>	Anonymous Wed May 8 22:29:05 2019 No.3923983 >>3919820 Your bees are fucking terrifying. They are the stuff of nightmares. Remove the teeth for sure and make cuter, rounder eyes, holy shit.

Anonymous Thu May 9 05:14:05 2019 No.3924289

OP here, just an update, my experiment is a success. I have made up my opinions about the kind of client I am having. I understand a lot better now.

The client chosen this..>>3922792

I am just going to roll with it.Thanks everyone, this had taught me a lot. See you guys next time!

>>	Anonymous Thu May 9 05:15:58 2019 No.3924291 >>3923972 I was using this opportunity to study various successful art style, those you chosen are internationally known style. And the most universal.

Anonymous Thu May 9 05:35:02 2019 No.3924309

>>3919820
Don't get me wrong, this is an interesting style and there is nothing "wrong" with it.

...Unless it's for children. The eyes and mouths ARE creepy, it's like I'm looking at someone's acid trip. This is just a job, yeah? Cute it up for the poor little shits.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 9 06:09:18 2019 No.3924343 File: 24 KB, 707x662, A HAPPY BEE.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3924289 what a surprise! good to know I helped you out anon!

>>	Anonymous Thu May 9 06:55:10 2019 No.3924394 >>3924343 Thanks! if you are interested to be my friendo, add me at @tbho instagram. Thanks and bye!

>>	Anonymous Thu May 9 07:42:04 2019 No.3924431 >>3924343 Congratulations on having your art plagiarized

>>	Anonymous Thu May 9 08:07:35 2019 No.3924464 >>3924394 >thanks for doing my job so I can collect my pay! here's my instagram account if you want to follow me you're gonna make it anon

>>	Anonymous Thu May 9 08:32:39 2019 No.3924494 >>3919820 looks like cuphead characters

>>	Anonymous Thu May 9 09:00:00 2019 No.3924511 >>3924431 And not getting compensated.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 9 16:18:17 2019 No.3924935 >>3919932 this is your brain on /pol/, those bees like more like 1930's toon

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