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I was comissioned to make a public artwork for my local city. I am supposed to deliver a draft of the piece beforehand.
It will be a sculpture made from limestone, that I will carve on site by hand.

What do you think of my draft?

>> No.7195872

>>7195860
how am I supposed to interpret this?

it looks energetic, but I see no meaning in it and I feel no emotions when studying it.

>> No.7195883

>>7195860
Jesus Christ anon don't contribute to the modern slopification of our public monuments.

>> No.7195884

make it more vagina esque

>> No.7195895

>>7195872
It's supposed to be a monument to resilience.
But I get what you are saying.
Feeling like a fraud is what prompted me to even post this here.

>> No.7195896

>>7195895
>monument to resilience
like the resilience of women. Make it more vagina esque

>> No.7195898

>>7195896
Vaginas are quite resilient, I'll give you that.

>> No.7195900

>>7195860
>>7195895
Push the block shapes upwards a bit more so it resembles a castle, geometric, being engulfed by waves
Most people can't bother imagining things inside shapes so you have to hammer it down kind of hard

>> No.7195902

>>7195900
>Most people can't bother imagining things inside shapes so you have to hammer it down kind of hard
>things inside shapes
>hammer it down kind of hard
so it’s vagina esque?

>> No.7195907
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7195907

>>7195895
Just make a man breaking out of his chaining on the wall or something. Add a rosary on his neck for an even deeper interpretation

Your draft is fucking ass. Do not contribute to the modern """""art""""".
Focus on the fucking subject not your own farts

>> No.7195909

>>7195907
he could also make it more vagina esque, as to make it understandable

>> No.7195916

If I see this in my town, I swear to God, I will vandalize that shit with dogshit

>> No.7195917

>>7195860
Make a brutalist communism fist breaking a chain.

>> No.7197773

>>7195895
Make it depict something, holy fuck. Like a person with a dagger covered in wounds slitting the devil's throat.

>> No.7197777

>>7195895
The swirl is cool and energetic... But it makes me think of a tornado or whirlpool, not something I would associate with resilience

>> No.7197821

This fucking sucks and will deface your city. How about making something actually meaningful and beautiful or is that too oppressive for modernists?

>> No.7197841

>>7197773
Too metal for the pussies in city hall.

>> No.7197886

it’s nice. i like it op. also trust your design sense more cuz if they came to you they must want something like your previous body of work, or be satisfied with what they’ve seen you do.
maybe make it a bit more balanced and a little less lumpy and sagging in silhouette, shore it up/squash and stretch it a minor bit till its whorls feel like a more even believable transformation caught mid-state from its being originally something like a rectangular pillar/prism..?

>> No.7197914

>>7197841
it would be so fucking funny though

>> No.7198306

>>7195860
It's good man, problem is sculpting isn't real art. That is why you feel like a fraud. I am not being silly, but rather the authenticity of the experience you're after from creating 'art' is not ever going to translate properly to any project you must do with others involved.

A camel is a horse designed by committee, and a hack is just any artist who's personal measures are distorted by an external force.

The sculrpture concept looks solid, the sacle is nice, but the feeling you're having needs to be treated more maturely or you will have problems with clients in the future.

>> No.7198386

>>7198306
Sculpture is probably the most impressive art form from the perspective of normies. At least reductive sculpture is.

>> No.7198396
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>>7198306
>sculpting isn't real art
have you never paid attention during history class? clearly this fag hasn't seen a greek statue

>> No.7198755

>>7198306
You seem to be under the impression that sculpture like the OP somehow requires multiple people involved. I have experience carving stone and it is the absolute norm to work solo on a piece from start to finish.

>> No.7198758
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7198758

>>7195860
Study more Hermann Obrist.

>> No.7198873

>>7198755
Who's he delivering the draft to? Himself?

>> No.7198935

ask yourself this: what would arno breker do?

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>>7195860

>> No.7198993

>>7198939
Even though it just looks like a twisted up easter island head, I still prefer this version

>> No.7199044

>>7195860
make it an amongus when viewed from a certain angle

>> No.7199073

>>7198939
nice improvement!

>> No.7199150

Some kids gonna get his head stuck in that hole.
The sculpture looks generic and expected, uninspired.

>> No.7199303

>>7195860
The bottom half is just a repetition of the same rhythm over and over again. A good sculpture is supposed to be interesting and different from every angle, your shit is the same slop no matter where you look at it from. This is why you actually need to study instead of jumping on the contemp art bandwagon. Not that I blame you, anon, just saying. Try again, use classic art for inspiration (without necessarily making a classical piece).

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7199305

you should make chima

>> No.7199317

>>7195860
>>7195895
Perhaps the cube part slanted forward as if it's pushing against the waves will make it look like it's thriving despite it, or better yet, seeing if you can slant the whole sculpture a little more (making it skinnier at the top so it doesn't topple). The waves add good energy but I feel like you could do more.